Comments For An Unexpected Love Affair
classicbeauty (Signed) on Feb 16, 2008 03:19 am (And It All Falls Down)
Author's Response: Yay!!! Hmm...gym boy didn't fight back because of the whole cop issue, don't think he couldn't fight back...he just chose not to. hehe. I had to let Justin get that hit in you know? I know Malcolm is not being a favorite for anyone right now but he's just trying to protect his sis so don't dislike him too much now. So anyhoo, I'm glad you got this far and I can't wait for you to read the rest girl!!! And I got your email!!! I haven't read it yet, but I will and I'll reply! Thanks so much! :D Take care Dani.
oooo now thaat what i like to see, kick gyms boy a** Ju!
what kind of stuff is that anyway? a trainer with no backbone, got all that muscle and for what? his happy a** dont know how to fight, what gym boy need to do is go sit down somewhere and keep his d*mn trap shut!
and poor Ju, he didnt deserve that and big bro so was not right on that point. played them like a game of checkers.
dani
Author's Response: Yay!!! Hmm...gym boy didn't fight back because of the whole cop issue, don't think he couldn't fight back...he just chose not to. hehe. I had to let Justin get that hit in you know? I know Malcolm is not being a favorite for anyone right now but he's just trying to protect his sis so don't dislike him too much now. So anyhoo, I'm glad you got this far and I can't wait for you to read the rest girl!!! And I got your email!!! I haven't read it yet, but I will and I'll reply! Thanks so much! :D Take care Dani.
danie (Signed) on Dec 31, 2007 12:25 pm (And It All Falls Down)
this chapter seriously made me cry. if i was close with my brother as she is with hers i would have slapped him or something, i don't care if he's hurt. i have a violent type relationship with mine b/c he used to pick on me when i was smaller than him & now we don't talk alot.
Author's Response: Oh my goodness, I'm so sorry danie. I'm sorry it brought back some unpleasant memories. I know how that is. I'm really sorry about that, but, I'm glad you could relate to the characters. It made it real so I guess I got the emotions out there. I didn't mean to upset you though. I hope with the new year you and your bro can make a mends since you're family. Life is just so sort ... But, thanks a mill for the review. I appreciate it. I agree that Malcolm needed a slap...no doubt. I'll get to fixing this little mess soon. Have a blessed new year!
Author's Response: Oh my goodness, I'm so sorry danie. I'm sorry it brought back some unpleasant memories. I know how that is. I'm really sorry about that, but, I'm glad you could relate to the characters. It made it real so I guess I got the emotions out there. I didn't mean to upset you though. I hope with the new year you and your bro can make a mends since you're family. Life is just so sort ... But, thanks a mill for the review. I appreciate it. I agree that Malcolm needed a slap...no doubt. I'll get to fixing this little mess soon. Have a blessed new year!
SexualCoco (Signed) on Dec 29, 2007 03:09 am (And It All Falls Down)
OMFG, the drama D, the drama! Malcolm was cold-blooded for bringing up some old shit that Zara told him. But Justin knows how she really feels so why does it matter now? Girl, please fix this because this is crazy (but I loved it-haha). Good job girl and keep it coming!
Author's Response: Hahah I know Bri, the drama. But, don't worry. I'm going to get right to fixing it in the next update. Berry and Ju are gonna switch things up a bit so all is not lost. hehe. I'm telling you, I agree with you on that one. It really shouldn't matter and hopefully if they cooperate with me, it won't lmao...I'm glad you liked it, and muchas gracias for the review. I appreciate it. I'll be updating soon.
Author's Response: Hahah I know Bri, the drama. But, don't worry. I'm going to get right to fixing it in the next update. Berry and Ju are gonna switch things up a bit so all is not lost. hehe. I'm telling you, I agree with you on that one. It really shouldn't matter and hopefully if they cooperate with me, it won't lmao...I'm glad you liked it, and muchas gracias for the review. I appreciate it. I'll be updating soon.
wildthang (Signed) on Dec 28, 2007 11:39 am (And It All Falls Down)
oh poor berry and ju. what is wrong with malcolm? can't he see they love each other. I hope they can get through this. good work. update soon.
Author's Response: Malcolm is just trying to protect Zary. Don't worry I'll work on them all. hehe. Thanks for reviewing I'll update as soon as I can.
Author's Response: Malcolm is just trying to protect Zary. Don't worry I'll work on them all. hehe. Thanks for reviewing I'll update as soon as I can.
alimera (Signed) on Dec 28, 2007 07:44 am (And It All Falls Down)
Oh man, Jeremy is a butthole! Glad Justin returned the favor and punched him square in the nose! Update again soon!
Author's Response: hahaha yeah Jeremy really is. I just had to let Justin get that punch in. I mean he's been itching to do it for a while and Jeremy did deserve it. Glad you liked it. I'll be working on another update soon.
Author's Response: hahaha yeah Jeremy really is. I just had to let Justin get that punch in. I mean he's been itching to do it for a while and Jeremy did deserve it. Glad you liked it. I'll be working on another update soon.
lance_fan_4eva (Signed) on Dec 28, 2007 01:08 am (And It All Falls Down)
oooh!! more!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! More is on the way soon. I'm going to try working on the next update once I get some for my other stories out. :). Glad you liked it and thanks for the feedback.
Author's Response: Thanks! More is on the way soon. I'm going to try working on the next update once I get some for my other stories out. :). Glad you liked it and thanks for the feedback.
Boo_Berry_Crunch (Signed) on Dec 27, 2007 07:47 pm (And It All Falls Down)
Awwww....poor Zara and Justin. Stupid Malcom and Jeremy
Author's Response: Yeah i agree with you. It won't always be like that tho. It's going to take a little more for Zara and Justin to be apart. :). Thanks for reviewing. I appreciate it.
Author's Response: Yeah i agree with you. It won't always be like that tho. It's going to take a little more for Zara and Justin to be apart. :). Thanks for reviewing. I appreciate it.
