Malcolm is making me very mad but, I understand that he just loves his sister. Oh sorry that it is taking me sooo long to review.
i think it is too cute that yol like malcom, but i dont like him much right now cause he soo remind me of my brother. i mean sometime you scare me, for the simple fact its like you know the people i know lol, you following me again?
love it love it alots more more more
dani
Author's Response: Oh boy, I know these chapters with Zara and Malcolm are hard for you because of you and your bro history but I'm glad you're still reading. I know no one likes Malky right now but I still love him. :(. He's just being a big bro...I'll work on him and his nosy overprotective behind I promise. I guess it's just that brotherly love huh? Well, I'd say that Zara needs to work on her communication relationship with Malcolm. We know they love each other but she needs to stick up for herself. I can tell you that day will come no doubt. :). So thanks a lot for commenting and letting me know what you think. I appreciate it and I really hope that you and your bro can work things out.
Author's Response: Yeah, don't hate him just yet. I promise he has a good reason to be. hehe. And I'm so touched you love the story. awesome readers like you guys make it all worth while. hehe. Thanks a mill for commenting and letting me know what you thought.
Author's Response: Yes she did. That's just typical Zara huh? Well we'll see how it all turns out. I'm finally working on the next update so I'll get it out as soon as I can. Thanks for the feedback.
Author's Response: Zara needs to grow some balls against malcolm no doubt. I'll see how I can make that happen. But you know, it's a little more than just some brotherly overprotective love. hehe. I'll get to solving the malcolm issue for you guys...thanks for the review bri.
Author's Response: I will I'm working on it. Sorry for the delay. :)
Author's Response: Yay so glad you're still enjoying the story. I'll get to updating soon. Thanks a lot. :D
Author's Response: I'll update as soon as I can. Thanks! :)
Author's Response: I agree but it might be easier said than done? no worries, i work on them all for you guys. Thanks for commenting
Oh hell to the no...he couldnt grab MY phone like that. I dont care if he was my older brother...that boy better have some manners and stop gettin all up in Zara's buisness like that. I know he tryin to be all protective and shit but Zara a grown ass woman who can make her own choices without her brother bein all up under her. That aint right....brothers gotta know when shit like bein WAY too over protective aint right....but also little sisters need to learn that hidin shit...knowin they gon get caught at some point....from family(especially brothers that are police) aint right and they need to tell the truth and get on with life. I think Malcolm needs to get off his high horse and see that Zara loves Justin and aint nothin gon change that...not him or that assshole Christian!!!!
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!
PS: When I get pissed off or somethin gets to me(in a good or bad way) I sorta turn ghetto and get a little like my older sister who loves to have arguments and crap about random stuff.
Author's Response: Oh my goodness...well first off is totally cool that you wrote this and I'm glad you did because that means you could connect to the characters hehehe. And man, I have you guys not liking Malky now. :(. Don't be too mad at him, he's just trying to be a good brother to Zara. I mean they are all each other has right? Maybe he feels threatened that Ju will take his baby sis away from him? hint? hehe. I agree that he's too protective but then again he is a cop so i guess his nature makes things more intense. Don't worry. I'll work on him and on the entire situation as the updates go by. And boy Christian is another issue all together. He's gonna come in the story as some point too. :S. Hehe thanks for the great review. I appreciate it and I'll get to updating soon.
