kahnechick85 (Signed) on Feb 16, 2009 03:38 am (Holiday Bliss)
I hope that nothing happens when they're in New York. I love this, PMS

Author's Response: Well, I can't promise absolutely nothing will happen. That would make their trip boring right? :) lol. Thanks for commenting. I'll try to update again soon.



Sheila (Anonymous) on Feb 15, 2009 02:37 am (Holiday Bliss)
omg! thank you so much for updating again! this update was great. I liked the interaction with Justin and Jahzara. I felt bad for Christian but Justin and Jahzara are such a hot couple. but what is wrong with Justin? he has temper problems. hope we learn more about that soon. update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks for liking this story and reading even though it's hella long. lol. :) And Justin, well, he does have some issues which should be cleared up before the story is over. Bit, by bit, i'm hoping to ease you all into all the layers that make up his character so you all can have better insight on why he is the way he is, just like I did with Zara. Thanks for commenting. I'll update soon.



rev0586 (Anonymous) on Feb 15, 2009 12:50 am (Holiday Bliss)

"You're so full of shit Justin. You're twisted and cryptic." He really is a messed up person. He doesn't show it much, but it's there. Now was a spitting example of how warped his mind is sometimes. I can't believe he did that.

Hmmm is this something that I should look for n the future?? Cuz I've seen bits of him and his "jelousy/anger" issues but just not full out... I'd really like 2 c if there is more to him then it seems speacilly w. Christian coming in2 the picture... Dont keep me Waiting grl!!



Author's Response: Oh you're very perceptive. I know it was just a little paragraph, but it definitely said a lot about the darker side of Justin's character which Zara is beginning to see herself. I know this story is more focused on what makes up Zara and how she and Justin deals through everything, but I have to agree with you that Justin isn't all good and does have his darker moments which you all will certainly see fully and soon too. There is more to him. New York is going to be another turning point for the both of them...no doubt. Glad you noticed that side of him. I didn't want it to be too in your faces yet, but I did want you all to see that he's not all good because really, nobody is in real life. Everyone has their flaws and I was going for that with their characters. Soon, you all should understand fully how he really ticks just like I did for you guys with Zara. He's still has a little mystery to him. lol Thanks for the feedback.



alimera (Signed) on Feb 14, 2009 01:19 pm (Holiday Bliss)
Oh no, when she asks if she should be worried that's not a good sign...update again soon!

Author's Response: I totally agree. lol. You all will get to see how Justin 'gets bad by his property'. lol Don't forget he has his little anger issues. Thanks so much for commenting and still reading. I'll try to update again soon. thanks.





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