First off, HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY!!...Second... ohmygosh yes! It's about damn time that this happened. She needs to leave gym boy now and be with Justin; when is this cruise thingy they're supposed to be going on?? You need to update part two, pronto! (Thanks for the update btw..I loved it if you couldn't tell).

Author's Response: Thanks for the late bday wishes by the way. :)

OMG!!!!!!!!! first you leave us hanging for awhile, then you get us all sexed-up with this update and leave us hanging again. I don't like you very much right now. MORE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!

OMG! What more can I say! That ending was hot! But yeah what CAN he do with his tongue?LOL.

WOW!!!! Love it. Jeremy needs a beat down by Justin for what he did and I hope Zara doesn't go back to him.

ugh. one, WONDERFUL place to leave off (i was totally being sarcastic, that was the worst place to leave off!) and two, zara needs to recognize that jeremy is abusive and she needs to cut ALL TIES to him. maybe this night of passion with justin will make her see the light...? damn, update again soon, don't leave me with all these questions!!

finally :)

Justin need 2 kick his ass. now wth that said. Oh SHIT IT'S BOUT TO BE ON AND POPPIN!!I love this really i do.

scha-wing

FINALLY!!! I thought this would never happen, but I'm glad that Zara isn't holding back anymore and letting her true feelings guide her. Now I really can't wait to see what happens next so update soon! Thanks!

No Jeremy did NOT hit her. That's it, leave him! Like Justin said, it only takes one fuckin time. But ugh, you're a tease! You can't end it there! I hope he handles her good, and if she's banging Justin, I have NO doubt that he'll take care of her right. Can't wait for the 2nd part!

AAAHHHHH this is it huh!! but please dont let her go back to Jeremy he needs to be dumped big time and Mallory as well

ugh, those two are frustrating to the point of screming, honestly!! update again soon, i want them to go on their little trip already!!! lol.

Author's Response: I know they are. They won't be like that for too long. The next update is done so check back soon. :). Thanks for the feedback. hehe.

i kinda understand why she dosent wanna be w/ jt b/c words do hurt n what he said wont go awy that easily. and with jer. he hasnt hurt her yet?? but i dont want her to get hurt int the process of it if she does go with having both of them and if jt wants too

Author's Response: Yeah I know what you mean. Wait and see what happens next. Thanks so much for the feedback. I appreciate all of them. :D

well, happy birthday, twin! haha. you should not be planning a damn thing, child. you sound like me, haha. i made some dinner reservations for today and it was awesome. i requested off work (and am skipping school tomorrow... shhh.. haha) because i'm going to hang out with my best girls all weekend! woot! sleepover, movies, make up, and talking =]]] lol

Author's Response: lol thanks. That's so cool. I had a blast with the party. Hope yours went great too. :D

AUG!  more soon!

Author's Response: More is on the way. Thanks. :D