Bouncerok (Signed) on Jun 20, 2008 10:38 pm (Finally!)

Ok it has taken my a week to read this. only stoping for work and a little sleep. you have me hooked and I have to know what is going to happen next. some how i have this strange feeling that Jeremey is in on this as well as Christian and Mollery as well. that they have ganged up with each other and desiead to make therir lifes hell.

Update asap I love this story



Author's Response: Oh wow! Yay!!! *claps excitedly* Welcome to the Ju and Berry drama. hehehe. I'm really happy you were that hooked and couldn't stop reading. Hope you stick around till the end and enjoy what's to come. :) And I feel you on this conspiracy theory you have going. Hmmm...im not going to give anything away right now though, we'll be clearing up the little mystery as the updates go by, but thanks so much for liking this one and letting me know. it means alot. :D I should be updating sometime soon. I'm working on the next update. :)



DeterminedNot2Fall (Anonymous) on Jun 18, 2008 06:45 pm (Finally!)
That chick is still crazy regardless...with all the name slips and the showing up uninvited...that's going to real problem soon! lol

Author's Response: I def. agree that Felicity might be cause for some uncomfortable situations. lol. But we'll see how it all goes. Thanks a lot for reviewing and letting me know what you think. :)



alimera (Signed) on Jun 18, 2008 10:32 am (Finally!)
Whew, okay, they talked and they're happy. And now they can figure out this mystery together...am I supposed to know who drives a silver Honda, or does only Justin know? Lol. Update again soon!

Author's Response: You know I couldn't make them be apart like this forever; the best thing about those two is they can always come to some type of understanding. :) Yes, the mystery is well on it's way to being solved soon. No one knows who drives it, but they'll find out eventually. :D Thanks for the feedback.



SJane (Signed) on Jun 18, 2008 01:46 am (Finally!)
can i get a woot woot. Those two finally bucked up and laid everything out on the table with each other. About bloddy time

Author's Response: yep they did, finally! lol I agree, but it's not over yet but you know things are looking up; :) thanks for the feedback I appreciate it.



Gigi (Signed) on Jun 17, 2008 09:32 pm (Finally!)
OH COME ON!!! Sorry for yelling but it had to be done.

Author's Response: No worries, lol. I understand but I did promise I'd start fixing everything up in the best way possible with the outline I have done, so this is good start right? At least they are making some good progress. :)



SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Jun 17, 2008 07:30 pm (Finally!)
cause nothing good can come outta that. i have a VERY bad feeling bout this.

Author's Response: Yeah, but at least, we're getting into clearing everything up so that's a good thing right?  Thanks for the feedback.



SexualCoco (Signed) on Jun 17, 2008 04:42 pm (Finally!)
So now that Justin and Zara have cleared things up, Felicity's ass wants to spill the beans? She is fired for that one (haha). But I'm glad someone saw something so that they can start putting the pieces together. Now my gut is really screaming Jeremy, but I guess I'll find out later. Great update girlie!

Author's Response: Well, I promised I would start to clear up the mess so this is a good start right? hahaha. I still have to give it little edge. It's not really a mystery per say. I think what they really need to know is why things are happening this way. But Glad you liked it. I hope to update soon! :D



lance_fan_4eva (Signed) on Jun 17, 2008 12:24 pm (Finally!)
oooh more soon!  I want to see who's behind all the scary stuff!

Author's Response: Thanks! :) I'll try to get another update in soon once I finish updating one or two of my other stories I hope. Glad you liked it! :D



Ally (Signed) on Jun 17, 2008 12:00 pm ("Be With Me")

first:  I totally am loving this story.

 

and second, that quote at the beginning of this chapter " I guarantee it won't be easy"

is from the movie "Runaway Bride" I can't remember whether its Richard Gere's character of Julia Roberts' but I know its from that movie.  Its a cute movie and I love them together. 



Author's Response: Oh really? Sweet, I'll change the quote and put that in there thanks! And so glad you're liking the story. :D Thanks for the feedback.



classicbeauty (Signed) on Jun 16, 2008 02:42 am (A Step Back...?)

wowwie!

two updates in two days! now thats what im talking about!

loved it cant wait for more, now i thought she was taking what her doctor gave her not the diet stuff, so why is justin mad?

malky needs a chill pill but is so like my older brother! i get the feeling berry feels like she cant breathe, that is so me right now.

anywho, how are you and hows school?

miss you alots, my computer went to the shop and i lost all my writes, that i had been working on. so alittle bummed by that. but beyond that, nothin much here.

*hugs*

cant wait for more, hopefully good news from berry, justin and you!

dani

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Author's Response:

Yes, this is the story that's flowing out now so I'm getting it out before the inspiration shifts to another story. lol. And girl, I feel you on the whole malky vibes. Brothers are so overprotective and can't give you space to breathe! lol.

Anyway school is going well! Should be getting all A's this round. Yay! Keeping my fingers crossed for final grades. :) And I hope that your computer gets fixed soon and that you continue writing girly. I need to catch up on this story you started. :) I'll update soon so look out for that and thanks Dani girl! Means alot that you're still liking this one. 




classicbeauty (Signed) on Jun 16, 2008 02:36 am ('No One Will Tear Us Apart')

ooooooo yol and malcom sitting in a tree, K I S S I-

okay okay ill stop, but i bet theyd be cute together.

anywho, we broke some ground, lets some feelings out, but justin needs to breath in and out, its going to be okay.

at least i hope so.

Dani

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Author's Response: Woop! We'll hear more about Yol and Malcolm soon. :) :P



classicbeauty (Signed) on Jun 16, 2008 02:32 am (Confusion and Chaos)

aw hell no, no no no!

not christian! what is going on here? berry's lieing saying it was yol! why she gotta lie like that? thats not cool.

and christian callin the new boyfriend, dont he know thats a no no? i mean what is he thinking? 

its just too too muc--but i love it!

dani

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Author's Response: I know berry and Justin got issues right? And man, christian is slowly working his way into the story. Just wait till he's finally in it completely. ;) Thanks for the reviews girl. :)



classicbeauty (Signed) on Jun 16, 2008 02:28 am (Happy Thanksgiving...?)

Lori is a crazy bitch, i told him to drop her off the building the last time, but did he listen?

noooooo he didnt, now the *beep* is stocking him too? and look at the girl playing all dump like she dont know who it is! shes apart of it, isnt she?!

great chapter.

dani

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Author's Response: Lori is a crazy biatch and she's not fully gone just yet. :S. He should have shoved her behind off that building no doubt, but hey it's not too late right? haha kidding. Girl I love your reviews. :D



classicbeauty (Signed) on Jun 16, 2008 02:22 am (Unsettling Situations)

what?! naw not yol, i like her alot, like alot alot.

i want to see her and malky on at least one date, if at all possible?

loved it, good chapter

dani

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Author's Response: Yeah Yol doesn't deserve to get hurt. :) Glad you liked thanks.



kahnechick85 (Signed) on Jun 15, 2008 12:35 am (A Step Back...?)
They need to be honest with each other and talk about the phone calls, nothing will get better if they don't talk about it. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS

Author's Response: I agree, the next update is coming up so I hope you'll like it. Thanks for the feedback. :)





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