Blubelle0302 (Signed) on Sep 19, 2007 12:58 am (One Step Closer - Part 2)
Did I skip a chapter where they had sex? WTF, he got her a boat?? a BOAT? A boat is like a gift you give to a person that has fucked your brains out AND you married! He's seriously sprung on something. But, I think it's amazing that he loves her for just being who she is. It was so sweet for him to think of her like that. I hope that this vacay goes off as planned for them *crosses fingers* Can't wait to find out! Time for another chapter pleeease *big smile* wonderful 2 part update, I feel so spoiled!

Author's Response: No you didn't skip a chapter. lol. So we already know, it would be cruel and unusual for something intimate to not take place between them after all that's happened and the level of their attraction to the one another. I guess right now, it just comes down to when huh? I'm still trying to figure out the perfect time frame for this. Bare with me. All other times were just... Well, I sort of have this direction I want the story to go in so, everything has to mesh together. So glad you're still enjoying it. I know I maybe confused people with Justin's change and why he does the things he does or says the things he says. It will make sense soon. Hopefully, the next update will shed light on a lot of things between those two. Thanks for the feedback girl. They're very motivating.



Gigi (Signed) on Sep 18, 2007 10:39 pm (One Step Closer - Part 2)
SERIOUSLY ARE YOU KIDDING ME! HE BOUGHT HER A YACHT! Made I don't know what to think about this chapter. First he gets all mad then...UGH!

Author's Response: I'm sure if you think that's a good or bad thing. Well I think it could be a bit of both. Justin has issues and so does Zara. They make for an interesting pair I guess. :) Thanks for the feedback



rev0586 (Signed) on Sep 18, 2007 10:32 pm (One Step Closer - Part 2)
awwww thats so sweet i wish jt gave me a yacht better not really though lol

Author's Response: LOL yeah him and that gift...oh boy. We'll see how it turns out. Thanks for the feedback.



classicbeauty (Signed) on Sep 16, 2007 02:40 am (Strawberry)
Can we say-H O T T!? Girl u know I totally felt it wish it was me lol i cant wait to see how the VMAs go down and if she goes on vacation with him. more soon- Dani p.s. chocolate strawberry? thats could be my new email addy maybe license plate if that would make JT want me too lol



Timberlake (Signed) on Sep 15, 2007 10:49 pm (Strawberry)
oh my lordy, why won't they just break up with their supposed significant others and get together? justin can get the whole damn chocolate dipped strawberry and she can ride the timberlake express! lol



lance_fan_4eva (Signed) on Sep 15, 2007 06:00 pm (Strawberry)
Justin needs to either get over the jealousy.....or seriously realize that the whole deception thing won't last!  can't wait fore more!



Blubelle0302 (Signed) on Sep 15, 2007 11:31 am (Strawberry)
grrr gym boy needs to go away! you need to stop teasing and let them bang each other's brains out like...yesterday! I mean I know Jeremy is sweet and all, but Justin is who she wants, and if you want something, go after it! I gotta feeling this vacay is gonna be a disaster, but i know you never cease to surprise me! Great update and I can't wait for more!



wildthang (Signed) on Sep 15, 2007 10:36 am (Strawberry)
Awwwwwwwwww his strawberry dipped in chocolae. Oh Damn. That was hot!!! Everyone want Jeremy gone. But I feel bad for him because so far he's sweet. BUT I'm guessing we haven't seen Jer's bad side right?



alimera (Signed) on Sep 15, 2007 09:04 am (Strawberry)
stupid jeremy ruining the moment! god! lol, update again soon!



Vessy (Signed) on Sep 15, 2007 06:27 am (Strawberry)
good work!



CutiePie07 (Signed) on Sep 15, 2007 03:11 am (Strawberry)
Jeremy needs to go away...like right now! lol. Great update. Girl, tthanks for the compliment on AbO...if I'd known you were such a good writer, I would have been reading your stories a LONG time ago. lol. Update soon!



rev0586 (Signed) on Sep 15, 2007 02:30 am (A Shrouded Love)
my bad i meant that justin isnt gonna like to be sharing his woman



rev0586 (Signed) on Sep 15, 2007 02:29 am (Strawberry)
sounds like there is gonna e a love affair but im also thinkin justin is gonna like to be sharing his woman



SexualCoco (Signed) on Sep 15, 2007 12:12 am (Strawberry)
Yes dammit, they have to! I'm sorry but all this flirting is driving me crazy and they need to do something about it otherwise...well I think you have an idea as the author (haha). Great update though, I can't wait to read more!



Koralin_Timberlake (Signed) on Sep 14, 2007 10:52 pm (Strawberry)
Ba da ba ba ba, I'm lovin it





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