tda720 (Signed) on Aug 30, 2007 10:10 pm (The First Escapade)
DONNA!!! WTH?!?! They were just about to do the dirty and you had to go and make Trace interrupt them, I love that man but not now. You did this on purpose didn't you? I loved the update, despite their lack of an 'escapade'. Update when you get the chance girl, hope everything with school is going well!



wildthang (Signed) on Aug 30, 2007 10:03 pm (The First Escapade)

that was blazing hot! but I agree. you are such a tease girl. now I'm desperate to see Z and Justin 'go all the way'. I bet it iz going to be burning like the sun lol. 




rev0586 (Signed) on Aug 30, 2007 09:32 pm (The First Escapade)
that was fucking hot



Blubelle0302 (Signed) on Aug 30, 2007 08:19 pm (The First Escapade)
geez! you're more of a tease than Justin! That was really hotttt. I think it's so romantic how they can't get enough of each other. And yet at the same time, trifliing lmao. Well Justin has always been trifling, but what Zara is doing to Jeremy just ain't right. He seems like a really nice guy and crazy about her and from what I know for now, he doesn't deserve that. I mean I don't like him with Zara, but the man is a human being. If she wants Justin, why can't she just break up with him? I'd rather her be with Justin when she's available! Great update and get that lesson! But don't wait too long to give us another one! peash!



alimera (Signed) on Aug 30, 2007 02:00 pm (The First Escapade)
hahahahaha, that was great. now they seriously need to get it on!! update again soon!



Koralin_Timberlake (Signed) on Aug 30, 2007 11:23 am (The First Escapade)
Wonderfulness!!!



what_where (Signed) on Aug 30, 2007 02:26 am (The First Escapade)
Another amazingly hot chapter!! Z and J are so cute together! please update soon.



Vegas Chick (Signed) on Aug 29, 2007 03:02 pm (And So, It Begins)

OMG THEY ARE BOTH IN SO MUCH TROUBLE!!!! OH I DONT WISH TO BE THEM BECAUSE HELL IS GOING TO HIT THE FAN!!! AND ITS NOT GOING TO BE PRETTY!!! OH I HOPE THAT YOU UPDATE SOON I WANT TO KNOW WHAT YOU HAVE GOT FOR THEM TO TAKE NEXT. I DO HOPE THIS GETS JERMEY OUT OF THE PIC I JUST DONT LIKE HIM...LOL

 

Tina 



Author's Response: Yes they are! Even worse than when you 'crash your parents car' or get in trouble with the professor. hehehe. But I like the drama. It makes things interesting. But you'll have to wait and see exactly what transpires between these characters. Well, the next update is done and will be up shortly. And Jeremy isn't going anywhere just yet. hehe. I like having him around. Don't you? lol...anyway, thanks for the great feedback Tina. :-D



Vegas Chick (Signed) on Aug 29, 2007 02:29 pm (A Shrouded Love)

I loved that you wrote Never trust a creature that bleeds 5-7 day once every month and not die...It took me a little time to figure it out and when I did I was rolling on my bed with laughter...lol..I loved it!!

 

Tina 



Author's Response: Haha, yeah, that's something my brother always says so I give him the credit for that one. hehe. So glad you loved it! And thanks for the feedback. :-)



LucidDreams (Signed) on Aug 27, 2007 01:34 am (And So, It Begins)
OMG are you joking? Omg. I cannot believe those two! lol. It was about damn time they realized they want each other badly and can't resist. But I think there is going to be drama with Justin, Jeremy, Zara, Mallory, Jessica and those pics that were taken of J & Z in the parking lot. The kissing scene was intense but i agree that they were dumb to do it in public. I'm so into this story. I need more and soon! It's heating up! Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I have such loyal fans for this story. You all really make my writing worthwhile. :-D. Stay posted for the next update. It will be posted up shortly



Timberlake (Signed) on Aug 26, 2007 07:18 pm (And So, It Begins)
WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! omg. lol

Author's Response: Lol. Couldn't have said it any better myself. Can't wait for you to read the next update. It's done! I'll post it up. Thanks for the reviews and I love your stories girl!



Timberlake (Signed) on Aug 26, 2007 11:57 am (Communication Is Key)
oh c'mon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! they're so cute! i don't get it. why are they frontin'????? lmao

Author's Response: Aww yeah they are cute aren't they? Well, i don't know why they're being so difficult with their feelings towards each other. They're confusing...and I have a twisted imagination so it works out perfectly. lol. Thanks for the feedback.



alimera (Signed) on Aug 26, 2007 08:25 am (And So, It Begins)
omg, she needs to get over it--she's supposed to be with justin anyway!! update again soon!

Author's Response: Haha I feel you on that. But I think Zara and Justin are a little more twisted than you all realize. hehe. Thanks for the feedback.



classicbeauty (Signed) on Aug 26, 2007 02:20 am (And So, It Begins)
ooo unexpected.. is it me or does it look like its getting juicy?! me like alot and cannot- *pauses* no no take that back- will not wait for more but i totally understand about school. ok so i was thinking...we could just meet at jamba juice before or after class, my treat and u bring the new chapters in return? ye..no? i thought i try... lol Dani p.s. look at u girl 12 chapters and over a hundred review u and Tay need to rub off on me so when i post my stuff one day i get amazing feedback like yall...

Author's Response: It is getting juicy! It's not just you...it is! hehe. Yeah, I know, I just did a killer programming exam, so I need my fiction fix to mellow me out. lol. Girl I'll bring the chaps and you bring the cash and we're good! hehe j/k. Aww thanks so much for the wonderful compliment. I hope you post your stuff up, I'd love to read it. I need to catch up on my reading. I'm behind since i have school. I only ever get to write my updates and post them up and maybe catch up on one or two chaps of some stories. But thanks for the amazing feedback as usual. The next update is done. I'll post it up soon.



classicbeauty (Signed) on Aug 26, 2007 01:41 am (Communication Is Key)
What da? i swear men can be confusing... but im totally feeling it! - Dani

Author's Response: Yeah men are confusing sometimes. I agree with you on that one whole heartedly. lol.





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