all i can say is that they are asking for trouble

Author's Response: Yea I totally and 100% agree with you. But, it makes things interesting...don't you agree? :-). Thanks for the feedback.

Greatest thing to come home to! These past two chapters were great, they need to forget about Jessica and Jeremy and get it on!!

Author's Response: Girl I am so glad you're back! And I sent a reply to your email so check it out! I love your stories. And I so want a sequel to 'it's too late' hehe. But i'm just randomly throwing that request out there. Feel free to catch it. lol. Anyway, Jeremy isn't going anywhere. I mean if i was to kill him off in an accident, or let's say, Justin and Zara plot to push he and Mallory out the window on like...oh i dunno...the fifteenth floor of a building, then were will all the drama be? hehe. Anyway, things are just getting interesting. Hope you stick around for more. Thanks for the feedback Tay!

Oh goodness, oh goodness. MORE making out! SCORE. I loved the kissing scene and I love how open and fun Zara is to Justin now. I can't believe she boldly kissed him in the parking lot and said that she didn't regret it? Who is this person! Her and J are just so...*sigh* What a cute couple. See, this is why I love reading fanfics, it takes your mind off his real life and he can just kick back and be attracted to a normal everyday girl, instead of a celebrity. It makes you feel a little more connected to him you know? And yeah, I thought kissing in the parking lot was stupid too. Hot nonetheless, but stupid. Gah, they couldn't wait til they got home?? And I do too feel sorry for Jeremy...I mean not really cause I want her with Justin, but you know lmao. I honestly think that subconsciously Jeremy is her escape from Justin. He likes her, she likes him. She doesn't work for him, and you know, he's hot. But her real heart belongs to Justin, if not, then why would she keep kissing him? But anyway, enough with this long ass review lmao. You're a great writer with a great story and everyday I wake up, I look forward to reading a new chapter. I wish you luck with school and even with school, thanks so much for making us happy with your frequent updates!

Author's Response: Yes more making out! woop woop! hehe. Yeah, they are really open with each other now. Doesn't that make you wonder what's that about? hehe. I'm just messing. I guess they are finally seeing each other in a new light. Yeah they are very cute. I agree with the statement about fanfics. I love that we can create alternate realities where Justin can be anyone we want him to be. It's bittersweet. It does make you feel an odd connection. It also makes you wonder what he's like. Not the celebrity side that we see, but just him in his common element.  Like i said once, jeremy isn't that easy to get rid of. hehe. You'll have to rough it out a little. Hope you'll stick with them to the end. I'm so glad you love this story. And thank you so much for the awesome reviews. The next update is done so stay posted. :-D. Thanks for the well wishes with school too! You all are so great.

Oh snap, I think them two are going to face some serious drama real soon. Besides that, steamy ass update. :) Jay and Zara sitting in a tree. K.I.S.S.I.N.G....... Couldn't help it. Oh, and here's that link to Coffee's site for ya. http://www.coffee.tasting-eden.com/homev21.html

Author's Response: Yeah I agree about the drama part. lol. Thanks. :-). Oh! And thank you for the link. She's the bomb yo! lol. hehe. Thanks for the feedback. More is coming soon.

That was smoking man. So happy things are heating up between them. * But yeah, I agree they are stupid.* lol. I bet a ton of drama is just waiting to take place over the horizon. lol Update again soon. I like the speedy updates. And good luck with school. I know it sucks ass sometimes.

Author's Response: Man,  Lol. No matter though. Thanks for the feedback. I smell the drama too. hehe. Thanks for the well wishes. School is a pain.

I read the entire thing last night. Such an amazing story. I love your style of writing and how the characters come to life through their point of views. And I love their personalities. You're a talented writer dear. Keep the fantabulous work coming. This is a fav of mine for sure. I wonder what's going to happen with Justin and Zara now that they can't seem to deny each other. I feel bad for Jeremy, but I agree with Zara. If I had a chance to kiss JT, my boyfriend would be the last thing on my mind. lol

Author's Response: Oh wow, I'm honored. Welcome to the drama that is Justin and Zara! hehe. I hope you follow me to the end and enjoy your read. Thanks for the compliment as well. Much appreciated. :-)

awesome

Author's Response: Thanks Vessy! :-)

For some weird reason, this story reminds me of that fic Falsas Esperanzas by Coffee. Maybe because of the whole character issue with the ' Big Black Woman ' and Justin falling out of his being an ass mode and giving the girl a chance. Also, the story is very well written just like Coffee's, ( which by the way I love all of her fics ) and having said that, I really, really, like this one. It's a definite fav on here. Jay and Zara are just so adorable and I really like her character. In other words, UPDATE SOON! Lol, sorry for the caps but I just felt that it was necessary. :) Great work!

Author's Response: Awww really? I know Coffee is a great writier so that's very flattering. :-D I've never read that story though. I realized she isn't on here either. Any chance you have a link to her site? I'd like to read it. :-D. Hehe, thanks for the compliment and I'm so happy you like this one. I wasn't so sure about it. But, i always wanted to write a fic about Justin going for someone not so much his type. So i rolled with the idea. It's working out well for me so far since so many seem to be enjoying their read. I'm glad you like her character even though she might get soft of overwhelming to bare. :-D. And I agree that her and Justin are adorable together. hehe. Don't worry! The next update is done! It will be posted up soon. hehe. Thanks for the wonderful review. ;-D.

This story is so funny! They are very cute together.

Author's Response: I'm glad you find the little humor in it. Hehe. I was going for that based on how they were percieved through their P.O.Vs and interracted with each other. I only want things intense when necessary. :-D. I'm glad you like it. They were a cute pair. Thanks a lot for the feed back.

Aww now that was cute and sweet. I like this very much. Now let's hope that 'berry' comes to her senses and soon, while Justin still wants her. Great update. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Aww thank you so much. Let's hope she does come around before it's too late. More coming real soon. Thanks for the feed back

omg, i loved it. they were just a little bit more honest with one another, good start!! update again soon!

Author's Response: Oh I'm happy you loved it. Yea they were, which is progress. :). I'll be updating soon. Thanks for the feed back.

Oh gosh, Justin and Zara are so cute! This was a cute chapter. I think her and Jeremy are cute, but something about him seems off to me. Probably cause I want her to be with Justin lmao. I'm glad that he told her the truth about how he feels about her and Jeremy. NOW maybe she could get over being so scared of him and the possibility of them cause he likes her back. I'm so ready for them to makeout again or hopefully get their groove on if you know what I means *wink wink*. I can't wait for that time to come, Justin will be hooked on her for sure if he's about to faint from just smelling her strawberry scent lmao. He's so adorable! Anyways, good chap! and I certainly can't wait for more!

Author's Response: They are cute aren't they? hehe. Thanks. Yeah Jeremy is certainly a mystery still. Don't worry he isn't going anywhere just yet. We'll get to know some more about him soon. Them hooking up sure would be something. Then we'd have to deal with them being together right? hehe, well, not too sure when that's going to happen, but i hope you stick around to find out. And Lmao about get their groove on. You all are really anxious about that huh? I guess if that does happen, it has to be explosive. hehe. I'm all up for Justin being adorable towards Zara, but he can still be a jerk so beware. hehe. Thanks for the great feed back. More is on the way.

Why are Justin's girlfriends(real-life are not) always "mean, fake hos" in like every fan fiction ever written? lol Like, they all just happen to be evil and that's why it never works out? lol Anyway, men are confusing and she's dumb. Good chap, more soon :)

Author's Response: I think it's easy to get JT's g/fs kicked to the crub when they're mean and vindictive. Hehe. Besides, they tend to make things interesting. If they were nice and Justin cheated or dumped them for the main charater girl, that would make him a complete asshole. hehehe. But I get where you're coming from. Hehe. Men are most certainly confusing and Zara I'd say is kind of messed up in the head when it comes to what she wants. I guess she's not used to all the attention. :-D. Thanks for the feed back.

*sniffuling* awe poor J he didnt deserve that! and ssh-e *eyes well* how...how could she be so cold?! *looks for a tissue* what they do? switch personality? oh this is just too much! *pause* but im lovin and needin more! so whatcha gonna do about it? lol - Dani p.s. awe thanks and i absolutely love ur work! stay tuned? u aint gotta worry im not going nowhere...u just keep em' comin'!

Author's Response: Hehehe, I know I'm responding after the update is already up, so check it out! And thanks for the compliment. I have no doubt you're going anywhere hehe.