I loooooooooooove mama, shes da best. lol i cant wait to see what happens next.
mile high club huh?
lol looove it
all i can say is w o w
more
dani
i think it is too cute that yol like malcom, but i dont like him much right now cause he soo remind me of my brother. i mean sometime you scare me, for the simple fact its like you know the people i know lol, you following me again?
love it love it alots more more more
dani
loved it real layed back, sometime need that but okay so whats up the christian thing?
huh? you going to leave us hangin like that for real? ill remember this. dont you worry.
dani
forgot my rating for 10 lol cause this chapter deserves it
dani
OMG!!!!!!! WOW, what the *beep* was that u aint right Ms. P! not at all but im lovin it all of it
dani
this one was great chapter and i love how the characters look! total hotties. i hope she stops the pills
gotta review some more
dani
Author's Response: Oh boy, I know these chapters with Zara and Malcolm are hard for you because of you and your bro history but I'm glad you're still reading. I know no one likes Malky right now but I still love him. :(. He's just being a big bro...I'll work on him and his nosy overprotective behind I promise. I guess it's just that brotherly love huh? Well, I'd say that Zara needs to work on her communication relationship with Malcolm. We know they love each other but she needs to stick up for herself. I can tell you that day will come no doubt. :). So thanks a lot for commenting and letting me know what you think. I appreciate it and I really hope that you and your bro can work things out.
oooo now thaat what i like to see, kick gyms boy a** Ju!
what kind of stuff is that anyway? a trainer with no backbone, got all that muscle and for what? his happy a** dont know how to fight, what gym boy need to do is go sit down somewhere and keep his d*mn trap shut!
and poor Ju, he didnt deserve that and big bro so was not right on that point. played them like a game of checkers.
dani
Author's Response: Yay!!! Hmm...gym boy didn't fight back because of the whole cop issue, don't think he couldn't fight back...he just chose not to. hehe. I had to let Justin get that hit in you know? I know Malcolm is not being a favorite for anyone right now but he's just trying to protect his sis so don't dislike him too much now. So anyhoo, I'm glad you got this far and I can't wait for you to read the rest girl!!! And I got your email!!! I haven't read it yet, but I will and I'll reply! Thanks so much! :D Take care Dani.
all i got to say about this chapter is, auntie is a B...
im sure you can figure it out from here.
but on the lighter side things lory is gone, woohoo
dani
Author's Response: Yay i Know everyone was rooting for lory to be gone. lol. But is she really? Hmmm...hehehe. glad you had time to read all these updates dani.
i dont like that photo guy, always making berry sad or mad, so not cool... plus now the lil worm wants her to lie and mess up her chance with Ju, i dont like him at all
im happy she is finally going to let someone help her, coming clean about not eating and the diet pills.
now on to that pig headed boyfriend of hers, gym boy needs his a** kicked, always trying to start something with no back bone to back it up. chick butt is what he is!
dani
Author's Response: Oh man that photo guy is something alright. But I'm not going to get into him now. hehe. Gym boy is really annoying eh? well you know we're dealing with him. You Kno he's important in bringing the drama. hehe.
talkin about turning point alright. i so didnt expect them to get hot and heavy in the shower...but hey she finally made up her mind and i looooooooooooove that...
right she did make up her mind? he cant be a prefect fit and she still hadnt made up her mind by now... if not, we are going have to have alittle talk k?
dani
Author's Response: Hehe I had to put in the shower scene you know that girl. hehehe. Yeah she finally made up her mind. :D I'm glad that you're catching up dani...no doubt. I hope you like the updates. hehe.
