Update really soon

So I once wrote a visual where the main characters kept getting interrupted before they could ever get off, but I never truly realized how frustrating that was to read until your story woman! Buwahhaha. I'm like dying here for the poor guys! On that note, once again...another AMAZING chapter. Seriously you rock, it's ok you don't update that often....it'd be nice if you did but just as long as you don't quit the story it's all good! The ending of this chapter has got me a little worried. You always leave these damn cliffhangers! Damn you! hahahah. Amazing work as always...*Mwuah*

ooooohhhhh lawd! that is all I can really say. Damn

LMAO! i think it's bear... and OMG! that's so fucked uP!!!!! poor trev! she's gonna destroy all of LA, isn't she? lawd have mercy......... that's so sad. justin was all proud and then the bitch goes... i don't have a daughter???? WHAT THE FUCK! the saying goes mama's baby, daddy's maybe, no the other way around! what a crack whore. poor, poor trevy =[ girl, you better update soon. don't make me hurt you! haha

it's hurr the hell up and update ,please how dare u leave it like that.

it's bear. and OMG. like, okay, 3 months in between chapters is ALMOST acceptable when they're this good. but after this particular chapter, there is now way in hell that you can wait until what? january to update again? shelly, update nowwwwwwww!!!

This is such an amazing story. I hate that it is updated so infrequently but it is always worth the wait. I love it.

NO! Why can't they just have sex already?! Why do you keep doing this?! This is twice in a row now that they've been on the way to a hotel to do the do when something comes up. I'm pissed off at you. And don't ever have me waiting for an update for this long again, understand?!

Oh my God, I waited so long for this update and I have to say it was soooooo worth it. Just.. amazing! LOVE IT!

And at first I had gotten so wrapped up in the heat of the chapter that I thought maybe I was just being too cynical last time when I was worried that something was going to happen and ruin everything. And then came the su madre dropkick happened! :| Things were going so well! She was having freudian slips and calling him her boyfriend and then physical crash, emotional crash. But it's good it happened, because it gave us the key to understanding Trevion: The pride in his eyes almost killed me. He was so, so proud of me. In a way that I’d never understand.
I don't know how Louise doesn't know she has a daughter, when she obviously does, because it seems like she genuinely believes that she doesn't have one. So maybe she isn't a bad mother, maybe she's a crazy one? lol I dunno, I feel like I should re-read a chapter with Burns it in for a clue. I just hope that Trev doesn't seriously hurt someone before she can get the explanation.
In response to the Author's Note: never apologize for long chapters! I love them. :)
And back to the chapter, loved it, loved it, loved it! Can't wait for the next update! Which I'm sure you're going to be posting in....5...4...3...2...

lol, it's "bear" but omg, things were about to get good with the two of them! please don't take forever to update again, you'll kill me!

Oh damn what the hell is wrong with Louise? Why does it take Justin to remind her that Trevion is her daughter? I can definitely tell this is about to get crazy. Oh by the way this whole chapter was the business from start to finish. But Trevion know she was wrong for what she was doing in that car. There was no way he was going to be able to concentrate! Lol. -Milla