Comments For Broken Flowers
MochaB (Signed) on Sep 28, 2008 04:26 pm (Eleven)
hmmm...very intersting. haha. she'll knock him out of the park soon hopefully. haha! i can't belive trace was actually civil. gaaah! update! like...now! :o)



Shufflee (Signed) on Sep 28, 2008 02:40 pm (Eleven)
this game he's playing is dangerous



MissTasha (Signed) on Sep 28, 2008 01:41 pm (Eleven)
Ass. Please update soon.



princess (Anonymous) on Sep 28, 2008 10:10 am (Eleven)
what the fuck is his deal, God.  This justin is an uber douchebag



MissTasha (Signed) on Sep 22, 2008 10:35 pm (Ten)
Great chapter. I know things will get veeeeery, very interesting now. Please update soon.



osasu (Anonymous) on Sep 21, 2008 03:24 pm (Ten)
AMAZING! read the first story and luvin this one!!



alimera (Signed) on Sep 20, 2008 10:09 am (Ten)
Haha, this ought to be fun. Lol, update again soon!



MochaB (Signed) on Sep 19, 2008 04:50 pm (Ten)

i agree with everything LuLu said. haha. ashlynn is just trying to be the bigger person and do her job. justin is definitely afraid HE will be the one that gives into his temptation. Seriously, who said anything about Kim?!? yeah...you justin. not ash. and trace gets on my nerves with his attitude towards ashlynn. she didn't do anything to him! yeah justin's his boy and all, but he needs to get rid of his attitude and hatred. she didn't do anything to him. he needs to just keep his mouth shut around her. who is he to ask her what she's doing there?!? could you not tell that she's working when the secretary directed you in an office where she was standing in dressed nicely and said that he two o'clock was here? duh! ugh! i'm getting mad all over again! haha. seriously though, ash saved justin's life, then he treats her like she has a highly contagious and deadly disease. does trace know about that?!? UGH! ok. that's all. ugh. update soon. haha. :o)




LuLu (Signed) on Sep 18, 2008 08:18 pm (Ten)
At first I was like - Justin's got some damn nerve say he doesn't want to be around her, but then he randomly brought up Kim and I was like ah ha. He's afraid that if he's around Ashlynn he's going to give in to temptation. Hehehe - that's what he gets.

And how immature of him to turn this into a competition? Ashlynn's just trying to do her job - how does that translate into her playing some sort of head game with him?

I don't think Justin is being very realistic about the situation he's in with Ashlynn and Kim. He hurt Ashlynn big time and I don't think he really understands that or how hard it is for her to be around him. And he's not very conscious of how threatened Kim is by Ashlynn - she is not going to be happy with this.

Ok and one more thing - I promise LoL - what's up with Trace's attitude toward Ashlynn? How is it that he and Kim see Ashlynn as the vilian in her relationship with Justin? A lot of people need to get real in this story.

OK I'm done now LoL. Needless to say I really liked this chapter. More soon please!



SJane (Signed) on Sep 18, 2008 07:37 pm (Ten)
oh ding ding ding let the games begin lol i'm like a kid on a sugar high waiting to see what happens lol



mzmillion (Signed) on Sep 18, 2008 02:23 pm (Ten)
Ok you know that Lips Of Pink was my fave story and I was upset when I thought you weren't going to keep with this one, imagine my surprise when I find that I'm 7 chapters behind, I'm so excited, the story is great Brit.



kahnechick85 (Signed) on Sep 18, 2008 10:51 am (Ten)

They both need to get the fuck over it. They both screwed up their relationship. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS.




MochaB (Signed) on Sep 10, 2008 06:24 pm (Nine)
haha! oh man i can not wait to see what goes down at their meeting. update soon! :o)



alimera (Signed) on Sep 10, 2008 11:12 am (Nine)
Hahaha, she was definitely just jinxed. I'll bet my ridiculous salary that her new clients are none other than the two boys she'd rather never see again! Lol, update again soon!



MochaB (Signed) on Sep 07, 2008 10:31 pm (Eight)
haha. yeah. ok justin. so kim had a moment of truth? well good for her in pretty much admitting that she's threatened by ashlynn when the girl didn't even do anything to her. moment of truth or not, i still can't stand her. i can't wait to see what happens when they go to ash's job. update soon. :o)





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