Comments For Jade
d_simplicity (Signed) on Aug 30, 2007 02:39 am (Going Under)
Wow, Justin is a psychotic, deranged lunatic! Haha. My sympathy goes out to Jade. I wonder what that 'rustling' was. Can't wait to see what happens next. Great update.
Author's Response: LOL Yeah, Justin isn't all quite there and I wanted to portray that part a lot in this story. Things are getting really good. There's a lot of different directions I could take this story in. A lot of surprises along the way. Thank you for the review Donna!
Author's Response: LOL Yeah, Justin isn't all quite there and I wanted to portray that part a lot in this story. Things are getting really good. There's a lot of different directions I could take this story in. A lot of surprises along the way. Thank you for the review Donna!
aria (Signed) on Aug 29, 2007 09:11 pm (Going Under)
You really grabbed my attention with this chapter, it's so angst-ridden. I like that it's different than most stories. I can't wait to learn Jade's back story, and why Justin is the way he is.
Author's Response: Yeah, the further into the chapters there's a huge backing to these characters. I'm so happy you like it aria. I'm working the next chapter, it should be out very soon. Thank you for the review!
Author's Response: Yeah, the further into the chapters there's a huge backing to these characters. I'm so happy you like it aria. I'm working the next chapter, it should be out very soon. Thank you for the review!
lostinadreamx (Signed) on Aug 29, 2007 07:59 pm (Going Under)
Author's Response: Haha, yep something's going to happen very soon. Hope you're still following me to the end. Thanks a lot for the review!
Justin is a friggin psycho. Not cool not cool. He raped her! But i loves the story Jane!
Author's Response: Haha, yep something's going to happen very soon. Hope you're still following me to the end. Thanks a lot for the review!
tda720 (Signed) on Aug 29, 2007 07:44 pm (Going Under)
Wow, poor Jade. I really like where this is going, but I hope something happens to change the way Justin treats her, either that or she gets away. Update soon!
Author's Response: I don't know really. I'm trying to take it in a different direction but who knows? I might go another way with this. Thank you Taylor!
Author's Response: I don't know really. I'm trying to take it in a different direction but who knows? I might go another way with this. Thank you Taylor!
Gigi (Signed) on Aug 29, 2007 07:36 pm (Going Under)
Ok what is going on?
Author's Response: LOL That's funny. Did you read the chapter? What are you confused on? Well, its only the chapter and the prologue, there's more to it if you keep on reading.
Author's Response: LOL That's funny. Did you read the chapter? What are you confused on? Well, its only the chapter and the prologue, there's more to it if you keep on reading.
