Comments For Ashes
Chelsia (Signed) on Jun 05, 2007 06:00 pm (crooked man)
whoa whoa, when did this mae and justin thing happen? have i been living under a rock or is this just out of the blue? i'm pretty happy there's another chapter sitting here waiting for me to read to figure things out more....and fyi, i dont like how kate's only calling once a week....

Author's Response: i hope its not out of the blue....but then again i think i may exclude entire parts of the story that are only in my head.... lol



Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Jun 04, 2007 11:16 pm (crooked man)
OK...maybe I can warm up to the possibility of a Justin/Mae encounter. *Throws hands up in frustration* OK! You got me! So I was wanting the encounter to happen when she was tying his tie? No biggie! LOL. Awesome update!

Author's Response: LOL YESSSS! my goal is complete. that was the point. thanks so much!



chicagokiss (Signed) on Jun 02, 2007 04:14 pm (crooked man)
The thought of Justin not being able to tie a tie makes him cute, like a puppy cute. :)

Author's Response: lol well i think its good when men can be a little helpless :) thanks for the review



smrkks (Signed) on Jun 02, 2007 02:51 pm (crooked man)
okay so aside from the fact that im really on team mae/trace.. the tie moment had my heart doing a little skip in anticipation. and i love mae simply because she is fantastic. update soon ash that was a little bit of a teaser of a chapter. don't make me get into my analogies again. :)

Author's Response: stace....such a stickler. teaser. hmph that took me two hours lol. come back to me star!!!



lesanne (Signed) on Jun 01, 2007 06:03 pm (crooked man)
I really like this story, and I have to live without it for the summer. Well, at least I will have lots of reading to catch up on when I'm back in town.

As far as the chapter is concerned, I smell lots of trouble.

Author's Response: les...this is sad. i am responding to this and you're not even there to read it. why even bother with witty banter :(



nameless (Signed) on Jun 01, 2007 03:58 pm (crooked man)
Justin going on a date, Trace has a girl on the side. Poor Mae, she needs lovin' from someone other than Baby J.

Author's Response: i know huh? how come men always seem to be doing better than us girls....thanks for the review :)



Hollie (Signed) on Jun 01, 2007 01:00 pm (crooked man)
Hmmm. Intresante. More, please

Author's Response: lol just because you asked nice...



alimera (Signed) on Jun 01, 2007 08:30 am (crooked man)
love it...update again soon!

Author's Response: thanks so much! working on it :)



westernway (Signed) on Jun 01, 2007 02:25 am (crooked man)
I love that you updated this! Good chapter and I adored the moments between Justin and Jonah as well as the little tie moment between Mae and J. Throw someone a bone ;) - Amanda

Author's Response: bones. hmmmm overrated i think. mostly i think i will draw this out as long as possible and...lol



Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Jun 01, 2007 01:30 am (crooked man)
OMG! My name! LoL. You're awesome! Haha. I don't know if I appreciate the " dog walker/psychologist/yoga instructor" but hey...*shrugs* what can you do. What an awesome chapter! I really REALLY can't wait to see where this is going...something needs to happen...whether it's between Mae and Trace or Mae and Justin...something! Awesome job once again! TTYL -Traci PS-We need to catch up!

Author's Response: i thought you might like that :) i love that you like this! as for action....keep reading lol





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