Comments For Ashes
Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Dec 05, 2007 12:14 am (the clock struck one)
Ugh...what a slimy little skank she is!And I was giving her the benefit of the doubt before but she just threw all that out the window. How dare she throw up their agreement when she didnt even frickin stay put for the year...he did! Ugh, these are the type of women that I can't stand!
Ok, now that I'm calmer. Awesome job! I have been oddly hooked since day one! LOL. Can't wait for the next chappy!
Ok, now that I'm calmer. Awesome job! I have been oddly hooked since day one! LOL. Can't wait for the next chappy!
danie (Signed) on Dec 04, 2007 10:01 pm (the clock struck one)
he should send his mom with them b/c i don't trust that girl for nothing.
Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Dec 04, 2007 12:15 am (the clock struck one)
Oh nooooooo! I knew something like this was gonna happen :( Ok so I say Mae quits ... lol, and stay with Justin. But then I think Justin would want her to stay on so that she can be with Jonah :( Awww I'm so torn! LoL. Awesome job as usual, and I'm glad the update was quicker this time :) Nice job! Can't wait for more :) ttyl -Traci
Maggie (Signed) on Dec 03, 2007 03:34 pm (the clock struck one)
Okay, so how long before you get rid of Kate? I've had it with her and she's going one way or another. I swear the girl has no redeeming qualities.
jerseygirl1833 (Signed) on Dec 03, 2007 09:24 am (the clock struck one)
1.) Trace needs to grow up and get over it. 2.) Kate's a snake. and 3.) OH HELL NO! She is not taking her and the baby with her! Nuh Uh!
alimera (Signed) on Dec 03, 2007 08:04 am (the clock struck one)
Okay, between the asshole Trace and the bitch Kate, Justin is in one hell of a knot. Trace is wrong to make Justin choose between him and Mae; a true friend wouldn't do that. And Kate is wrong for taking both Jonah and Mae away from him. Oh man, I hope he doesn't buckle while he's all alone. Update again soon!
MissTasha (Signed) on Dec 03, 2007 07:21 am (the clock struck one)
Kate's a meanie. Trace is a meanie, too. Please update soon.
a_moments_grace (Signed) on Dec 03, 2007 06:37 am (the clock struck one)
:( ok...I thought this story was getting happier...not...crappier (and that's in no way a comment on your writing or the quality of this story) I just....she can't take Jonah!...technically she can, but still! ooohhhh....this doesn't look good...not at all
Hollie (Signed) on Dec 03, 2007 05:24 am (the clock struck one)
At first I had at least some sympathy for Kate, but this reeks of manipulation. Makes it difficult to continue feeling any sympathy for her.
Karlita (Signed) on Dec 03, 2007 01:50 am (the clock struck one)
Noooo! That's such a terrible situation. I felt sorry for her at first, but now I think Kate's just dreadful.
smrkks (Signed) on Dec 03, 2007 01:27 am (the clock struck one)
ashley, i hate kate. GOD. what a stupid bitch. like, it would be great if she had really pure and lovely reasons for wanting to take his bubba with her.. but SHE'S AWFUL. make her disappear. please please please dont make a mess of this. please? but the chapter was great so stop whining!! ;)
