Comments For Ashes
nameless (Signed) on Jul 07, 2007 11:04 pm (came tumbling after)
You can't just leave it there, the SEXUAL TENSION is too high. More, more, more.



smrkks (Signed) on Jul 07, 2007 10:31 pm (came tumbling after)
oh you know what.. i have one more thing to add.. i better get a sexual. and that's not even a request- that's a demand. :)



Hollie (Signed) on Jul 07, 2007 07:01 pm (came tumbling after)
I've only just worked out that all yoru chapter titles are from nursery rhymes. Am I slow or what? Anyway, I love this. You knew that, but I think it bears repetition



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Jul 07, 2007 05:00 pm (came tumbling after)

Oooh....I sense a hook up coming on :-D  They just need to get it on already, I mean...c'mon!

Loved it Ash, it's amazing :)




Mr_Mrs_JRT (Signed) on Jul 07, 2007 03:40 pm (came tumbling after)
lets get it on Im waiting for the Kiss stop teasing me cause i know its coming lol good chapter



smrkks (Signed) on Jul 07, 2007 03:25 pm (came tumbling after)
ahhhh well FINALLY she updated and not that i expected anything less but it was absolutely FANTASTIC. and mae's feelings... and justin's adorableness. it's just wonderfuul.



Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Jul 07, 2007 02:12 pm (came tumbling after)
Hmm. LoL. Awesome chapter, and so it begins! Great job! I can't wait for more! It's gonna be interesting to see where this goes. :) Update soon! -Traci



alimera (Signed) on Jul 07, 2007 02:05 pm (came tumbling after)
ooooooooooooohhhhh man he added her! "i don't know what i'd do if something happened to you two" HE CARES!! wooooooooooooooooooot! lol, update again soon, this is getting really good!



Chelsia (Signed) on Jul 07, 2007 01:54 pm (came tumbling after)
so i was upset that he was so mad at her until i read 'i dont know what i would do if something happened to you two'. that made it all better.....now they just need to kiss....



smrkks (Signed) on Jun 30, 2007 04:36 pm (cry baby bunting)
...i really, really don't like people like that. kate's acting like a 12 year old who didn't get invited to the birthday party of a kid that she didnt even like in the first place. and she really REALLY needs to not bother mae. loved the chapter tho.. i missed youuu!



nameless (Signed) on Jun 29, 2007 07:31 pm (cry baby bunting)
Justin + Mae sitting in a tree, k i s s...wait that hasn't happen yet. I think you should make it happen. :)



chicagokiss (Signed) on Jun 28, 2007 04:09 am (cry baby bunting)

I can't wait for the drama that's about to happen. Update soon.




Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Jun 27, 2007 02:57 pm (cry baby bunting)
Awesome! Intense! I need more! Like...now. Now would be nice. In fact it would be very nice!



Maggie (Signed) on Jun 27, 2007 02:39 pm (cry baby bunting)
Okay this whole working thig is not fun when I can only connect to the internet even less than I do at home when you are writing. Now, I HATE Kate. Tried to like her but have now given in and requesting that she sign away her parental rights. I'm done ranting now.



westernway (Signed) on Jun 27, 2007 12:36 pm (cry baby bunting)
Kate = Stupid BitchMae = Freaking awesomeJustin = needs to move in on the Freaking Awesome-ness regardless of what Stupid Bitch says or does Trace = Troll but a loveable one at that. More Trace! Oranges = the love of my life! Me = Needing An Update. Now! 
That is all: 
Skittles





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