Comments For Without You
classicbeauty (Signed) on Sep 16, 2007 03:20 am (Chapter 1)
first off the song was perfect it worked so well with ur idea. i dont like dani she was such a hoe, i mean come on another man in their bed? didnt she know two wrongs make a right and poor chase didnt they know they were hurting him too?! but a trilogy never hurt anyone...Dani

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I love Paramore, idk if your into rock music (I have acoustic versions of their songs) but the song I used definitely fits the idea of the story. Dani was troubled, can you blame her? Like I said to Donna, maybe a third part will come.. hmm you never know.



d_simplicity (Signed) on Sep 15, 2007 01:54 pm (Chapter 1)
Well, I was just getting ready to head offline but when I refreshed the page I saw this. First, Woohoo for a second part. But, OMG! That was so sad and depressing. She's a compulsive cheater and Justin is a compulsive drinker and they are both just...*sigh*. I feel bad for them. They have psychological issues. :D. Honestly, I didn't see it ending any other way. Not all stories have happy endings. Wait this is the end right? Because if you wanted to come out with a third part I'm just saying...I don't know *shrugs*...if you wanted to...I'd read it. Hehe. Ok I'm pushing it. lol. It was another amazing short and I fully enjoyed it. :-D.

Author's Response: Don't you love when that happens? You know what they say, once a cheater, always a cheater but Justin did somewhat get better, right? And as far as a third part, hmm I'm not sure it all depends on how I'm feeling (these came as spur of the moment ideas when I was listening to the featured songs, so maybe). Thanks for reviewing, glad you enjoyed it!





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