Hollie (Signed) on Jul 08, 2007 05:17 am (The Beginning: Part Twenty Two)
This is why I like the fact thatthis story zips back and forth between now an dthen. Leave this total mystery as to how it got so bad (well, not total, but you do wonder what finally kicks it off). Maaaaarvellous

Author's Response: why thank you. dont worry, the mystery will slowly be solved chapter by chapter



Vessy (Signed) on Jul 08, 2007 05:14 am (The Beginning: Part Twenty Two)
awesome chapter

Author's Response: glad you liked it



LoveYou2 (Signed) on Jul 08, 2007 01:55 am (The Beginning: Part Twenty Two)
Hmm, me no likey Kyle. They're cute, I want a boyfriend :( lol more soon!

Author's Response: yes a boyfriend would be nice,wouldnt it?



crash coincidence (Signed) on Jul 08, 2007 12:29 am (The Beginning: Part Twenty Two)
so kyle.....i think hes shifty. just make him gay so i don't have to worry about him any more. i think that will work. but this all needs to start falling into place. things can't be good forever and yeah, i need things to be good. so fix this lol!

Author's Response: i actually considered making him gay...but that would be way too easy so....no....





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