glad that lynn ddn't go the complete monster route this time, but good god. she was WAY nervous, understandable, but it even make me a little jittery lol so i was thinking all these say the beginning and the first chapter say the middle....does that mean that maybe, just maybe there is hope for this black cloud to dispate?? loved the chapter :)

Author's Response: well there can't just be a beginning and a middle, right? who knows..... ;)

Hehe, well that went better than the first time! Maybe she'll relax more and they'll get along, *shrug* Great chapter, more soon :D

Author's Response: second time is the charm, right? glad you liked the chapter

Ah, the dreaded Kyle. Dumb Jerk! J/K! You did an awesome job and I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: lol you dont even know kyle yet.....you're right though, it's dreaded cause you know it won't be good. thanks for the feedback :)