Comments For White Lines
lostinadreamx (Signed) on Oct 19, 2007 01:59 pm (one)
Awww JC is such a nice guy. He and Chione are cute together... and Justin is an ass! Good work!



SexualCoco (Signed) on Oct 02, 2007 01:27 am (one)
I am so glad you updated this story! I can't wait to see what happens next, so please update soon!



Gigi (Signed) on Oct 01, 2007 06:06 pm (one)
Ok really can't wait to see what happens next.



tda720 (Signed) on Oct 01, 2007 02:54 pm (one)
I'm really happy you're updating this story because I loved the first chapter when I read it a while back. I'm really interested in what's going to happen, is Justin going to come back in Dionne and Chione's life? Update when you can!



Hollie (Signed) on Oct 01, 2007 02:31 pm (one)
Hon, the gender/name of that baby is all over the place in this chapter. Otherwise, it rocked

Author's Response: i know, i'm in school and i'm trying not to get caught while i edit!





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