Comments For White Lines
Maggie (Signed) on Nov 10, 2007 12:18 pm (five)
Justin needs some serious help. Damn that boy is a mess. Can't wait for the next update :)
lostinadreamx (Signed) on Oct 19, 2007 02:19 pm (four)
Oh wow...that wwas deep. I hope Justin is going to be okay. Update soon.
lostinadreamx (Signed) on Oct 19, 2007 01:59 pm (one)
Awww JC is such a nice guy. He and Chione are cute together... and Justin is an ass! Good work!
SexualCoco (Signed) on Oct 12, 2007 02:27 pm (four)
Wow, that last part was intense as hell...I hope someone finds him though before he slips away. Great job though, can't wait to read more!
Maggie (Signed) on Oct 08, 2007 04:59 pm (three)
I didn't realize you had posted this here. I love it. By the way, the banner you have for this at your site is adorable, I love Dionne's picture :)
fsls07 (Signed) on Oct 08, 2007 12:11 am (three)
justin needs to get it together so that he can hurry up and get back to his family! love the update
d_simplicity (Signed) on Oct 07, 2007 11:35 pm (three)
Hey I'm loving this story. Can't wait for the next update. Hope Justin gets his shit together and soon.
Sugar Magnolia (Anonymous) on Oct 02, 2007 07:39 pm (two)
Well this is definitely different. Keep up the good work.
SexualCoco (Signed) on Oct 02, 2007 01:27 am (one)
I am so glad you updated this story! I can't wait to see what happens next, so please update soon!
tda720 (Signed) on Oct 01, 2007 02:54 pm (one)
I'm really happy you're updating this story because I loved the first chapter when I read it a while back. I'm really interested in what's going to happen, is Justin going to come back in Dionne and Chione's life? Update when you can!
Hollie (Signed) on Oct 01, 2007 02:31 pm (one)
Hon, the gender/name of that baby is all over the place in this chapter. Otherwise, it rocked
Author's Response: i know, i'm in school and i'm trying not to get caught while i edit!
Author's Response: i know, i'm in school and i'm trying not to get caught while i edit!
sington (Signed) on Sep 04, 2007 03:33 pm (prologue)
WOW! justin an abusiv husbend and cocaine addict. I cant wait to see where this story goes Finally we have a story thts diffrent! please continue and update soon!
jrtsnubianboricuaqueen (Signed) on Sep 04, 2007 02:22 pm (prologue)
I love it! I hope you write more. :P
