Comments For White Lines
lyss2118 (Signed) on Feb 17, 2008 05:21 pm (twelve)

aaah. god dont take so long to update. u kill us.

its amazing.

update soon! plzzz :)




morgan101 (Signed) on Feb 17, 2008 12:56 pm (prologue)
I have to say this story is something deep and inspiring. I don't get time to read like before anymore but I just sat and read everything last night and it's really good. can't wait to read more.



JoJo (Anonymous) on Feb 17, 2008 12:54 am (twelve)
i hope justin doesn't screw this up! great update! hope the next one comes soon!



Vessy (Signed) on Feb 16, 2008 01:36 pm (twelve)
can't wait to read the next one!



justinaham (Signed) on Feb 16, 2008 12:09 pm (twelve)
Aww I'm so excited I know i'mma have to get my tissue box out for their first meeting. LOL and who is Shana...? Naughty Justin ....



kahnechick85 (Signed) on Feb 16, 2008 12:08 pm (twelve)
I hope that Justin doesn't screw this up. He needs to do what's best for his daughter. I love this and I can't wait to see what's gonna happen. PMS



JoJo (Anonymous) on Feb 12, 2008 01:35 am (eleven)
wow! i don't blame Chione for saying no to Justin...i'm really curious about the whole secret or story with JC. can't wait for the next one. update soon!



kahnechick85 (Signed) on Feb 11, 2008 07:58 pm (eleven)
I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. I love this, PMS.



Gigi (Signed) on Feb 11, 2008 06:54 pm (eleven)
What did JC do?



SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Feb 11, 2008 06:18 pm (eleven)
ok..ok...ok what the fuck is goin through Justin's mind? What's this whole JC thing and why can'y Trace and Chione just let Justin explain himself? I'm so heated right now that I could kick Justin's ass for all the shit he's pulled then I could kiss Trace for being a kickass friend then I'd tell you that you are the awesomest writer in the Universe...so there....YOU ARE THE AWESOMEST WRITER IN THE UNIVERSE!!! this story gets into the soul and makes ya think.



d_simplicity (Signed) on Feb 11, 2008 05:48 pm (eleven)
Oh wow this is getting more and more complicated. And what is up with this JC thing? Hope you update again soon. I loved it.



sington (Signed) on Feb 11, 2008 10:58 am (eleven)
Please keep updating. I want to know what the deal is wih JC.



watchoutforthecar (Signed) on Feb 11, 2008 09:12 am (eleven)
You need to update this more often. I am almost in tears at the end.



FHJL88 (Signed) on Dec 29, 2007 05:20 pm (ten)
Great chapter. Update soon!



FHJL88 (Signed) on Dec 29, 2007 05:16 pm (nine)
I am glad that he has finally decided to change.





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