Comments For Ambiguity
aswift (Signed) on Oct 23, 2007 12:16 am (Chapter 1: The Loss of Innocence)
Author's Response:
I'm intrigued!
Author's Response:
Me too, because at the moment I have no idea where I'm going with this. So the story is essentially creating itself. Thanks for the review :)
stimble (Signed) on Oct 22, 2007 11:11 pm (Chapter 1: The Loss of Innocence)
my review is less on the story (p.s. i like it) and more on the set up. If you put space between each paragraph, or when a new person speak, it makes it easier to read. :-)
Author's Response: Thanks for the advice. I was actually going to do that yesterday, but I had to run off to neverland :) haha. Thanks for the comment!
Author's Response: Thanks for the advice. I was actually going to do that yesterday, but I had to run off to neverland :) haha. Thanks for the comment!
Gigi (Signed) on Oct 22, 2007 09:37 pm (Chapter 1: The Loss of Innocence)
More. Soon ok that's all I got.
Author's Response:
Author's Response:
Thanks for the comment! Definitely will have more soon.
