d_simplicity (Signed) on Nov 04, 2007 10:16 pm ("One Fine Wire")
Finally caught up again! And OMFG! I'm speechless. I'm so in love with this story it's ridiculous. hehe I really don't know where to begin so I'm just going to say brilliant! Please I hope Justin understands when Sadie admits to him what Derek did to her, and I really hope Justin socks Derek one with Deena's help! hehe. And wonderful update girl! I hope you update soon. :) I'm so excited to see what happens next. I hope Sadie can reconcile with her family before it's too late. More soon!



SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Nov 03, 2007 06:14 pm ("One Fine Wire")
She has to tell him the truth....Derek can't get away with what he did to her



stimble (Signed) on Nov 01, 2007 12:51 pm ("One Fine Wire")
awwwww,,,she didn't even realize she was raped. I hope justin doesn't take it out on her for going to derek...or i hope she doesn't end up preggy....that'd be bad...lol...good chapter :-)



loohoo (Signed) on Oct 27, 2007 12:34 am ("One Fine Wire")

Damn. You need to update ASAP. I need to know how Justin's gonna save her and make it all better. I love it! And the bonding between Sadie and Deena was brilliant... I wasn't expecting this kinda twist. But it's all brilliant!




JustinsAngel (Signed) on Oct 25, 2007 11:53 pm ("One Fine Wire")
Update soon



alimera (Signed) on Oct 25, 2007 03:45 pm ("One Fine Wire")
she needs your help more than ever now justin!! update again soon!!

Author's Response: Yes, Justin! Help Sadie! lol. No, but in all truth here...thanks for reviewing, it brightens my day and it makes things a whole lot easier for me to find some inspiration to write again. :)



SexualCoco (Signed) on Oct 25, 2007 03:44 pm ("One Fine Wire")
Girl, what are you talking about? This chapter was AMAZING. I feel like a broken record after I read your updates because all I can say is "wow." This chapter was hella deep and I can't believe that Derek did that to her. I am glad that she was able to have Deena there and eventually Justin there too. Great job and I can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Thanks, I guess its true that when people think their work is their worst, its actually their best, or did I say it wrong? lol Anyway, thanks for the review cause you've constantly supported me with this story and I have nothing but love for that. :)



smrkks (Signed) on Oct 25, 2007 12:19 pm ("One Fine Wire")
you should update this like right about nowwwwwwwwwwwww. fucking derek. what a stupid scum bag piece of shit. but it was a really great chapterr. nice work!

Author's Response: Ha, can I just say I LOVE your FB! lol. That made me happy. but on another note, I love your 'ready...break', I STILL haven't gone through the whole thing yet thats why I haven't even looked at the sequel but you're an amazing writer. Just though I'd let you know that. And thanks for the review. :)



Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Oct 25, 2007 11:05 am ("One Fine Wire")
Yeay! An update. Awesome job as usual. Poor Sadie, I can't wait to see what's going to happen. Justin needs to beat this guy, geez. I bet he did the same thing to Deena... :( Anyway, awesome job as usual! I can't wait to see what's going to happen. Hope more is to come soon! ttyl -Traci

Author's Response: Thanks Traci! :) Its always a good thing when I hear from you! But yeah more drama ahead...at least thats where I'm aiming.



LaughingAtYou (Signed) on Oct 25, 2007 07:57 am ("One Fine Wire")
I LOVE this story!!!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you love it. Makes my day! :)



alias known (Signed) on Oct 25, 2007 07:54 am ("One Fine Wire")
Oh no. I had a feeling that this is what was going to happen between Derek and Sadie. Poor Sadie. Please oh please don't let Justin be mad at her. I don't know if I can take it.

TERRIFIC update.

Author's Response: Thanks for liking it even though I thought it kind of sucked but I'm taking in what you asked.... :)



free2bjoye (Signed) on Oct 25, 2007 06:34 am ("One Fine Wire")
well im lovin the story so far and can't wait for an update!

Author's Response: thanks for the love! It makes me feel so good that my story is touching people! :)



free2bjoye (Signed) on Oct 25, 2007 06:34 am ("One Fine Wire")
well im lovin the story so far and can't wait for an update!





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