loohoo (Signed) on May 09, 2007 09:37 pm ("Angel")

well i am loving this story more and more with every chapter that you come out with! this is truly great. i honestly can't wait for the next chapter! please update soon!

thanks.



Author's Response: I'm glad that you're liking it so much - thanks. :)



SexualCoco (Signed) on May 09, 2007 07:36 pm ("Angel")
What are you talking about? This chapter was great and once again, very intense. Your attention to detail and description makes almost life-like when I read it (like I can imagine everything that's happening). Keep up the great work, I love this story!

Author's Response: haha. Thank you - I guess whatever I think is bad, yall think its good...so thats great! :) And I tried to make it as descriptive as I can in the eyes of Sadie...so if touched you, I'm cool with that.



aria (Signed) on May 09, 2007 12:00 pm ("Angel")
I could vividly envision that entire scene in my mind. It was just so intense. I can't believe you did this chapter in a rush because I couldn't tell.. it was just so good! Keep going.

Author's Response: Last night, I kept saying I had to get a chapter up for you guys cause I know I was leaving everyone in suspense, so I really was rushing (stayed up till 2 in the morning) thats why I thought it was so horrible - I didn't try on this chapter. But it lifts me up to know it affected you so much - that is just (in the words of Zora) "fucking awesome". lol. :) Thanks.



crash coincidence (Signed) on May 09, 2007 09:52 am ("Angel")
holy hell. that was just....fantastc. there is something so fresh and unknown about this story and i LOVE it.

Author's Response: Thank you - I'm trying to make this story the best I've written...so far. It means alot what you said. :)



rev0586 (Signed) on May 09, 2007 02:53 am ("Angel")
god its so sad but dont worry i think its going good... keep it up

Author's Response: It really is sad, isn't it? I just read over it and it felt as if I didn't write that - I guess the worst brings out the best in people's work, sometimes. lol. Thank you.



chicagokiss (Signed) on May 09, 2007 02:41 am ("Angel")
I don't think I've ever read anything like this. Keep this up.

Author's Response: I'm hoping thats a good thing, right? lol. Thanks so much! :)



Miraclebabe (Signed) on May 03, 2007 04:01 pm ("My Heart Is An Apple")
*CLAPS* That was deep and i'm crying cause I felt that down to my toes . All I can say is Sadie might be able to help him. HE need Jesus cause he done hit rock bottom.

Author's Response: Wow, girl - you touched me just because that really got to you. :) Lord knows he DOES he need Jesus and he thinks he has him, but he really doesn't at least not on his own terms and Sadie'll be there - not soon, but soon enough, hopefully. :) Thank you.



loohoo (Signed) on May 02, 2007 06:50 pm ("My Heart Is An Apple")

this a really AMAZING story. i really hope you update it soon. the story is a whole new side of justin that i've never really looked into, but with the whole love story line and his own personal drama...it's a great mix!

 can't wait to see the update!



Author's Response: thanks so much! :) I'm working on the new chapter as we speak - I'll try to have it up as soon as possible and since everyone liked this chapter so much, I'm working really hard on it.



SexualCoco (Signed) on May 02, 2007 12:13 am ("My Heart Is An Apple")
Wow, that was an intense ending, but very enjoyable as well. This story is great and I can't wait for more. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks so much - I'm really glad you like it and thank you for giving me fb, If you don't like anything, let me know - criticism makes me work harder. :)



lice_scott (Signed) on May 01, 2007 03:25 pm ("My Heart Is An Apple")

This chapter was very emotional.

Can't wait for  next chapter. XD 



Author's Response: I try. lol. Thank you, though.



Sassy Spacey (Signed) on May 01, 2007 11:37 am ("My Heart Is An Apple")
Awww. I'm starting to feel bad for him now :( Lynn is hilarious...love her! Awesome job once again :) Hope there's more soon! -Traci

Author's Response: Don't feel bad for him - he's the enemy! lol. Just playing. Thank you so much cuz you've been there since the beginning! :)



aria (Signed) on May 01, 2007 11:25 am ("My Heart Is An Apple")
Amazing chapter! I loved the Justin & Lynn interaction, funny stuff, I felt embarrassed for the dude. The ending was so sad though, now I sort of understand why he is so messed up.

Author's Response: Yeah, I want to get more in depth with Justin and his mother cuz I think its defines who he is by his relationship with his mother - lol and trust, I will deal with more of his issues in the upcoming chapters. Thank you. :)



rev0586 (Signed) on May 01, 2007 01:04 am ("My Heart Is An Apple")
thanks for putting what justin was thinkin when he saw sadie it wouldve been killing me not knowing what was goin on his mind lol

Author's Response: lol. yeah when I wrote it, i did it specifically for you - so you're welcome.



rev0586 (Signed) on Apr 29, 2007 05:03 pm ("Love Song For No One")
good ch. i love this story... i wonder what Justin was thinking when he was looking at her outfit update soon plz!



Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Apr 29, 2007 11:42 am ("Love Song For No One")
OoOo. Sucha a good chapter. Great job. I really hope she doesn't hurt Trace though :( poor guy. Justin seems to be moving in the right direction, let's hope he doesn't have any set backs. Awesome job once again! Can't wait for more! -Traci





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