Comments For Kiss It Make It Better
NsyncLanceFan (Signed) on Jul 30, 2011 11:34 pm (Kiss It Make It Better)
I like how it does specify the girl, so it makes it you! as the reader. Amazing writing skills!
Author's Response: Yeah I got in the habit of writing second person when I started writing again. It's interesting to write that way. Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: Yeah I got in the habit of writing second person when I started writing again. It's interesting to write that way. Thanks for the review!
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Dec 22, 2007 04:59 pm (Kiss It Make It Better)
lol. Gotta love calling him on his manhood. I loved it.
Author's Response: BWAHAHAHAHAHAH yeah he was being an ass. Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: BWAHAHAHAHAHAH yeah he was being an ass. Thanks for the review!
