I like how he swings from cocky and demanding to unsure and fumbling, up to this chapter. He's standing up and that's a good thing.
Oh, when JT said:“We don’t have to!” he exclaims, his eyes pleading, “We can keep it a secret. We’ve done it this long!”
All I thought was "Um, J, you might want to look up the word secret in the dictionary. I do not think it means what you think it means." lol. Then again, he's only 17. Most seventeen year olds would crow on every communication device they had at their disposal that they were banging someone six years their senior.
Just a little bit more to go....
Author's Response: I know he's kinda special when it comes to her but that's what I love about him. He just doesn't get it hahah. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: Thank you I'm glad you're enjoying it. The end of this kinda made me sad too. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! There may be more...who knows lol... Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: Bwahahahaha I am pretty cruel...but I have a little bit of a heart. There may be something else. Maybe. *giggle* Thanks for reading and reviewing!
i've never read and ending like that. i'm thinking about it and all i can say is how sad it is and its just making me cry again. so they'll have a too be continued thing? i hope there's no britney, i will not be reading those chapters if you do make a sequel or part two.
Author's Response: Definitely no sequel. There maybe a little something else but maybe not...who knows...lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Wow thank you so much. I worked really hard on this section and I'm really happy with how it turned out and that everyone is loving it. I dunno if its the end or not...it might be...it might not...who knows *grin* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Whether it's the end or not, you did a damn great job with this story. I'm usually not a fan of 1st POV, but this one was written well enough that it didn't even bother me. I think it was the maturity and the fact you knew your stuff--art and othewise. Just...wow! I'm glad the hubby wasn't paying attention to me trying not to bawl when I read this last chapter.
Awesome story. You deserved any award you get for this one! An absolute 10 and I never give that.
Author's Response: Wow thank you SO much... it means a lot that you enjoyed the story so much because I really put my heart into it. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: Sorry I don't do sequels...but there will possibly be something else...maybe...who knows! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: Sorry I don't do sequels... but there may be something...possibly... thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
If it's the end, there better be a reunion with lots and lots of 'I hate you because you let me leave/I hate that I let you leave' sex. Lots and lots and lottttts of it. Sequel time? Oh, yes. =] Amazing job, as always.
Author's Response: Sorry no sequels. There may be something though...possibly...who knows *grin* Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Sorry no sequel. I just don't have it in me to do a sequel. But there may be.... something...or not...who knows *grin* Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Despite how I may or may not be feeling right now about the ending (*cough icantbelieveyoubrokethemupbish cough*), I have to say thanks for the fun ride. Nice work. :)
Author's Response: Thanks Erin!!! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
NO, NO, NO! Not the end! Please update soon.
Author's Response: Sorry its the end...maybe....or something...lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Amazing job, Heather!!!! You're incredibly talented. I loved every minute of the drama and love...
Author's Response: REUNION??? There's no reunion in ALWL!!!! Or is there? *shifty eyes* Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Sorry it was the end. Maybe...probably...possibly. *giggle* Thanks for reading and reviewing!
