Author's Response: I totally understand what you're saying. Seeing them all grown up and finally relating to each other from the idea that they want to be together and they CAN be together. *sigh* Its probably my favorite chapter of the entire story. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
OMG!!!
So I know I still have part 2 to read but I just have to get this out.
First of all after reading UTTK and thinking it was one of the best stories I've ever read I decided to check out this famous story that everyone always raves about. So I've been reading it slowly over the past few weeks and I love it. Love it, love it, love it. but it wasn't until this chapter that I realised how wonderful this story really is!
I don't know what happened but when she was like "I started working at the Met five years ago" my eyes started watering and then when she said it had been ten years I started bawling. The thought of them being apart for ten years broke my heart! I'm still crying! haha. Ten years!! Golly gosh!
I think this chapter will be my favourite chapter ever! (until you outdo it at the end of UTTK, which I just know you will! haha) It was just so well written and gah! the way you wrote Justin was just so awesome - The way he was all grown up and mature exactly the way the real Justin is now but you could still see the 17yr old Justin in him! GAH! It was just perfect.
The hot chocolate had me bawling as well haha and I absolutely loved the way it could all so easily be a true story haha! like how you fit their summer in just before Justin and Britney went out and how you made Gone be about her which is just PERFECT!! lol
Ok so this review is turning into a novel and I really need to read the next bit!I just needed to get all this out! Haha
Author's Response: GUH YAY!!! Seriously ALWL is my baby. Like going back through and comparing it to UTTK the writing is a bit shotty but it also shows my growth which is something that is so important to see you know. Thank you so much for taking the time to read this and the fact that it moved you to tears seriously kind of made my day. Thank you so much for reading and reveiwing!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to read and review!!! I'm glad you're liking it!!
Author's Response: Bwahahahaha YEAH she does! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!