Comments For Slow Dance
Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Aug 28, 2008 10:43 am (Chapter 22)
How you gonna leave it off on that!! LOL. I can't wait for the next update. Awesome job!!



MochaB (Signed) on Aug 27, 2008 05:16 pm (Chapter 22)
an update! yaaaay!! i'm glad they made up...kind of. well they did, but justin sounds like he's not completely over it, which i can understand. hope that doesn't cause a problem. and kelen and her weight loss and stress levels? i don't think it's going to end well. i sense some good, especially for justin if  he gets laid haha, but also some more drama coming. i hope you uupdate soon. hope your move in went nicely too! :o)



SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Aug 27, 2008 01:58 am (Chapter 22)

that gettin laid comment....typical guy brain

 

I love how they are still together and didnt let one stupid fight get in the way

I love these two

 




kahnechick85 (Signed) on Aug 26, 2008 01:44 pm (Chapter 22)
I love this. I'm so glad you updated this. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen nexy. I'm glad that they are working things out. PMS



Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Aug 13, 2008 01:06 am (Chapter 21)
I really like this story! Like a whole lot! I can't wait for the next update! Awesome job, girl!!



Shoppingchica (Signed) on Aug 02, 2008 07:20 pm (Chapter 1)
That chapter was so awesome, I forgot about this story. I fell in love with it again, keep up the great work.



kahnechick85 (Signed) on Aug 01, 2008 07:53 pm (Chapter 21)
i can understand how Justin feels. She needs to start making the effort that he's making. I love this, PMS.



MochaB (Signed) on Aug 01, 2008 06:17 pm (Chapter 21)
wooo! man i felt the heat of that one! haha. first let me say that i am SO glad you updated. i absolutely love this story. second, you know...i'm with justin on this. it's understandable that he's busy preparing for tour. it's understandable that she's busy working on this charity event. but like he said, she made him feel so terrible about not being there with her, then she pulls this. the paperwork at the shop could've been done tomorrow. yes, alex is her brother and he has needs, but she could've sacrificed this one time. it's one time. she could've made it up to him by seeing him another day this week. she should've sacrificed something. justin has been doing it the whole time in their relationship, and yes he has done some stupid stuff, but the big forces against them are on her side, whether it's the people in her life or herself. and seriously, what could justin say? if he said that she prob. would've accused him of making her choose him over alex like her ex. ugh. and i'm glad she didn't defend eli! justin stayed in the car and that fool should've stayed in that building! so un-called for! anyway, i really hope we get another update soon. great job. :o)



Niffer (Signed) on Aug 01, 2008 08:53 am (Chapter 21)
Loved the update!  Hope Kelen can make this right!



Vessy (Signed) on Aug 01, 2008 04:39 am (Chapter 21)
amazing chapter! hope there is an update soon ;)



SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Aug 01, 2008 03:20 am (Chapter 21)

.......ARE.....YOU....FREAKIN'....SERIOUS!!!!

Justin and Kelen need to relax. She should have thought about how Justin would feel about being around Eli and her brother. The Charity thing shouldnt have taken over her life cause everyone wants to push everything at her. They are grown ass men and women and they know how to organize shit. Send Kelen an email about the hoices....talk to Angela. Kelen is stressing ou and she shouldnt be. And Justin knows that Alex is important to Kelen and shouldve stayed with her at the shop if he wanted to hang out. He needs to look at things from KELEN'S perspective sometimes cause he's acting like a spoiled Pop Star(althought....half of that is true, lol) They need to just disappear for a few days then come back when Justin has to pack and leave for his tour. If they are acting like this now...imagin when Justin leaves. HE's gonna be paranoid that Kelen is with Eli and she's gonna be missing that boy like crazy.

 

Had to get that off my chest....I can breathe now




SJane (Signed) on Aug 01, 2008 02:20 am (Chapter 21)
girl d/w i'm still here reading lol
Such a moving up date i knew it had to be brewing for Justin to have his time to snap they both need to be making compromises and it always came off as he did it more than her.



MochaB (Signed) on May 30, 2008 03:20 am (Chapter 20)
uuuuuugh...eli...i can't stand him. and i just know that this isn't the last thing he's going to do to cause problems. he's probably the one that told the media that they visit every week. i'm glad kelen finally sees that he likes her though. she needs to be more wary of him and not assume that he won't try anything. and justin needs to kick his butt. haha. i'm so happy you updated though. loooove this story. i hope you get another chapter out to us soon! :o)



SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on May 28, 2008 10:11 pm (Chapter 20)
I love them...Eli is a jerk but I get where he's coming from.



Vessy (Signed) on May 28, 2008 01:25 pm (Chapter 20)
great chapter!





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