Comments For Slow Dance
SJane (Signed) on Mar 06, 2008 11:28 pm (Chapter 17)
i am such a fan of this story girl. I loved how you had justin at the grammy's and with justin i have the same thing in my story too which gave me a chuckle. Our little ode to the old days. Seriously girl great story so far and i can't wait for an update, cause that eli guy is starting to weird me out lol



MochaB (Signed) on Mar 06, 2008 03:31 am (Chapter 17)

this blows. i'm so worried about what is going to happen. i would like for Eli to attempt to make a move, then kelen chew him out, then end their friendship and it be done. sadly, i don't think it'll be that easy and most likely i'm going to end up saying, "nooooooo!!!" and craving/demanding an update that will hopefully solve the drama that i'm sure is about to ensue. :o( haha. i won't be able to read any stories for 10 days because i'm going out of state, but when i come back i hope to be able to read 2 to 3 new chapters. hint. haha. keep it up! :o)

by the way, you write amazing sexual scenes. haha. seriously though, you do. 




Vessy (Signed) on Mar 05, 2008 06:05 am (Chapter 17)
amazing chapter!



SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Mar 04, 2008 06:30 pm (Chapter 17)
oh wow...thats random.Justin is such a damn perv...but a cute one

Author's Response: *lol* Isn't he? :p



kahnechick85 (Signed) on Mar 04, 2008 05:59 pm (Chapter 17)
LOL That was great. Something tells me that Eli has something up his sleeve. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS.

Author's Response: *whistles innocently* what makes you think thatt? Thanks for reading/reviewing!





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