Comments For Slow Dance
MochaB (Signed) on Apr 20, 2008 03:45 pm (Chapter 19)
you know...i have to say i'm on justin's side with this one. and even if eli doesn't like her, although i think he does, his presence still causes a problem and could tear them apart whether he tried something or not. kelen keeping the complete truth from him doesn't help justin's jealousy problems. not saying that he's aloud to be jealous and have jealous fits, but her doing that sure doesn't help. anyway, i still love this story! i can't wait to see what happens next so i hope to see a new chapter soon! :o)
SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Apr 20, 2008 02:18 pm (Chapter 19)
grrr...theses two were awesome then thiss had to happen...what the heck,.
glitter15 (Signed) on Apr 18, 2008 04:58 pm (Chapter 19)
Yay, I'm glad you updated. I've been reading up on this story this last week, it's really cute and I love it. Hopefully Kellen and Justin can work out the whole Eli siutation. I do think she was in the wrong this time, lol. :)
DeterminedNot2Fall (Anonymous) on Apr 18, 2008 03:40 pm (Chapter 19)
Kelen is in the wrong this time...and instead of being woman enough to apoligize she'll rather draw out their argument unnecessarily *smh*
She shouldn't have lied bottom line...Justin didn't even ask her, she volunteered the info making her lie 10x more ridiculous!
a_nonymous (Signed) on Apr 18, 2008 03:05 pm (Chapter 19)
Boo for arguments. And how did the paps know Justin was going to be there?
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Apr 18, 2008 12:25 pm (Chapter 19)
Kelen was wrong. I don't blame Justin for being mad. She didn't call Justin so he could come sit with her, but she let Eli sit there all night with her, and she lied to him. It was okay for Eli to be there in such an intimit moment, but not okay for her boyfriend to be there. I think that Kelen has a lot of thinking to do. If she wants to be with Justin she needs to cut Eli out and include Justin in all those person moments, but she's not doing that. I love this, PMS.
SJane (Signed) on Apr 18, 2008 04:47 am (Chapter 19)
great update miss. I'm with you on the writters block thing but you did great,
I think Kelen was majorly out of line not asking Eli to leave plus has she never here of a pay phone? lol
I think Kelen was majorly out of line not asking Eli to leave plus has she never here of a pay phone? lol
Tash2 (Signed) on Apr 18, 2008 02:07 am (Chapter 19)
SHE REALLY PUCKINH UP!!! I had to yell that out is she seriously not seeing what she doing abd letting Eli do. damn right Justin got reason to be mad he tryin ang she gonna lose him if she keep this ish up.You can tell I said that i ain't scared she some sense knocked into her lol.
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Apr 03, 2008 09:25 pm (Chapter 18)
I love this and I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. I'm glad that they are finally together, something tells me the ugly topic of Eli is gonna come up though. PMS.
Author's Response: *hmm* what makes you think that? *sneaky eyes* Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Author's Response: *hmm* what makes you think that? *sneaky eyes* Thanks for reading/reviewing!
amai84 (Signed) on Apr 02, 2008 07:50 pm (Chapter 18)
Aw, I love those two together. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Aww I'm glad! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Aww I'm glad! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
SJane (Signed) on Mar 06, 2008 11:30 pm (Chapter 1)
my bad i meant to say justin at the grammy's with joey lol i'm at work atm and trying to write this quick before i get caught
SJane (Signed) on Mar 06, 2008 11:28 pm (Chapter 17)
i am such a fan of this story girl. I loved how you had justin at the grammy's and with justin i have the same thing in my story too which gave me a chuckle. Our little ode to the old days. Seriously girl great story so far and i can't wait for an update, cause that eli guy is starting to weird me out lol
