MochaB (Signed) on Mar 06, 2008 03:31 am (
Chapter 17)
this blows. i'm so worried about what is going to happen. i would like for Eli to attempt to make a move, then kelen chew him out, then end their friendship and it be done. sadly, i don't think it'll be that easy and most likely i'm going to end up saying, "nooooooo!!!" and craving/demanding an update that will hopefully solve the drama that i'm sure is about to ensue. :o( haha. i won't be able to read any stories for 10 days because i'm going out of state, but when i come back i hope to be able to read 2 to 3 new chapters. hint. haha. keep it up! :o)
by the way, you write amazing sexual scenes. haha. seriously though, you do.
Vessy (Signed) on Mar 05, 2008 06:05 am (
Chapter 17)
amazing chapter!
SJane (Signed) on Mar 05, 2008 05:25 am (
Chapter 8)
wow u've got me hooked already i can't wait to read on
Author's Response: Aww thanks! I'm glad you like it so much!
SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Mar 04, 2008 06:30 pm (
Chapter 17)
oh wow...thats random.Justin is such a damn perv...but a cute one
Author's Response: *lol* Isn't he? :p
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Mar 04, 2008 05:59 pm (
Chapter 17)
LOL That was great. Something tells me that Eli has something up his sleeve. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS.
Author's Response: *whistles innocently* what makes you think thatt? Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Vessy (Signed) on Feb 26, 2008 12:28 pm (
Chapter 16)
great chapter!
SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Feb 25, 2008 07:25 pm (
Chapter 16)
awww...poor Alex.
MochaB (Signed) on Feb 09, 2008 11:04 pm (
Chapter 15)
He really did love sex. A lot.
haha! that was so funny to me. that was definitely intense...in a wonderful way. haha. i can't express how much i love him and kelen together. they are just so cute and justin is so sweet to her. moving in is a big step though so i hope it goes well. it does seem like they are moving fast, and with justin being terrified about the seriousness of his feelings for her, that could cause some conflict. i don't know...as always, i just hope in the end everything works out. oh! and they party their butts off at the grammy parties. haha.
update soon! :o)
RINI (Signed) on Feb 06, 2008 11:14 am (
Chapter 1)
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOO they are soooooooo cute..i love this story....UPDATE FAST ! loolz x
Vessy (Signed) on Feb 06, 2008 08:17 am (
Chapter 15)
great chapter!
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Feb 05, 2008 11:13 pm (
Chapter 15)
Aww Justin is so cute with her. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen with them. I love this, PMS.
SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Feb 05, 2008 10:15 pm (
Chapter 15)
that boy better not be scared...thats a great thing that he's thinkin about settlin down with Kelen....He should embrace that and tell her!!!
MochaB (Signed) on Feb 02, 2008 08:13 pm (
Chapter 14)
so yeah...that was HOT. haha. So great. :o) I really love them together. I love how they interact with each other. It's just so cute. I'm glad she's having PMS because I don't see that going over too well if she was pregnant. I can't wait to see what happens next, especially over the 2 week period. Update soon! :o)
SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Jan 31, 2008 12:36 am (
Chapter 14)
awww....she'll get it. I know she'll get it.
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Jan 31, 2008 12:02 am (
Chapter 14)
I can't wait to see what's gonna happen. Justin is so cute with his brothers. I love it. PMS.
