Comments For You Won't Find This
c00lxkiddo (Signed) on Dec 13, 2007 10:38 pm (You Won't Find This)
This was amazing. I don't know if I would've let him keep sleeping, but what she did was pretty powerful, too.

Author's Response:

Thanks, Courtney!

Truth is, all was running wonderfully, then I was going to go back and have her wake him up . . . but I just drew a blank on how it would play out.  *laughs*  So I just left it as it was.  It turned out as a smooth read, so I think I'm happy with it.

Thanks again!  :)

 -- Renee



d_simplicity (Signed) on Dec 11, 2007 12:46 pm (You Won't Find This)

That was an amazing short! I felt I was right there with them. I wanted to cry I was so sad like it was happening for real :-(. Ugh! I wanted her to wake them up so badly and beat on him. lmao! lol But what Nat did was the best thing. He felt it harder that way. Karma came tenfold. Anyway that was wonderful. The emotions and feelings were so real, so intense! I loved it. Wish you would write more with them.  But that was still great! :-D - Donna



Author's Response:

Thank you, Donna!

I've been playing with the idea of possibly using these characters again, but I still haven't figured out which guy it's supposed to be.  *laughs*  Maybe Nat and Un-named will appear again.  We'll just have to see.

Thanks again!

-- Renee



Ally (Signed) on Dec 10, 2007 05:09 pm (You Won't Find This)

I love this song, I love her whole freakin album and I wanted to write to this for a while, but my idea was no where near that, and

 THAT was amazing. I loved it and I totally wanted to cry when she tore the sonogram in half.

 Although, I'm a romantic at heart and i totally wish in my head that they could reconcile for the lil nugget's sake.

 

great job!



Author's Response:

Thanks, Ally!  Yeah, I love the album, too . . . this song is my absolute favorite, though.  I hope you let us see your take on the song - I love to see what others take from certain songs.

Oh, and a little note:  I have a friend whose nickname is Chicken and we call her little girl Nugget.  *laughs*

Thanks again!

-- Renee



Bobbilynn (Signed) on Dec 10, 2007 12:40 am (You Won't Find This)
I loved it!  Great idea =]  You should make a longer story stemming off of this ... really.  It'd be good!

Author's Response:

Hi Bobilynn!  Thanks for the kudos . . . makes a girl feel special in a world where actual feedback is in extremely short supply.  *laughs*  Glad you liked it!

-- Renee



wishful thinker (Signed) on Dec 10, 2007 12:37 am (You Won't Find This)

Seriously how long did it take you to write this? :)

From start to finish it was well written and made the character easy to relate to.

Best sentence: He'd mistaken her resignition for strength, her silence for acceptace.

Priceless anymore?



Author's Response:

Hey there, thinker!  Thanks for the comment.  This one really didn't take too long - I tend to be really nitpicky about my own stuff, so maybe a couple hours, editing and all.

Thanks again!  Oh, and here: :-)  That's the closest I can get to that happy face sticker.  *laughs*

 -- Renee





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