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DaniD (Signed) on Jun 26, 2008 10:21 am (Chapter 17: Seriously?)

Wow..Just finished reading from the beginning. Love this story, land love your character Veda.

Looks like Justin is being a dumbass right now. Letting his "girlfriend" put the kabosh on his friendship with Veda. He really hurt her feelings, if he keeps this up then who could blame her for going home to Dallas? Might be the kick in the ass Justin needs. Hey, I'd like to see his reaction to Veda getting a boyfriend.

They are both in deep denial..though at least Veda admits she has a little crush to herself. Justin is so in love with her..it's funny!  Please update again soon!  :D



Author's Response: Thanks so much. Justin is being very shady. I think you might see his reaction to Veda seeing someone else sometime soon. Thanks for reading! I'm glad you like it :)



SJane (Signed) on Jun 25, 2008 06:48 pm (Chapter 17: Seriously?)
an early relationship and ht egirl is already dictatiing the way justin is lol maybe not making him do things but jealousy is no ones friend

Author's Response: Yeah, early issues already, that's never a good sign lol Thanks for reading!



Sox (Signed) on Jun 25, 2008 02:54 pm (Chapter 17: Seriously?)

So let's get rid of this girlfriend quickly. She's not doing anyone any good lol It's good Dallas has the other dancers that have her back when Justin's being a dummy. I hope he breaks up with the girl soon!

Anyway, I'm rambling. I love this story! Awesome update! More? 



Author's Response: lol Yeah, she's got her real friends close lol Thanks for reading!



Vessy (Signed) on Jun 25, 2008 01:55 pm (Chapter 17: Seriously?)
awesome update! can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot!



SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Jun 25, 2008 01:36 pm (Chapter 17: Seriously?)
grrrr....Justin's girlfriend is pissing ME off.....I cant stand that girl. He should be with Veda

Author's Response: That seems to be what everyone's thinking... we'll see if that happens haha thanks for reading!



alimera (Signed) on Jun 25, 2008 01:25 pm (Chapter 17: Seriously?)
Hmm. I don't think I like the girlfriend and neither does Dallas...time to get rid of her! Haha, update again soon!

Author's Response: lol if only it were that easy :)





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