Comments For Jump
alimera (Signed) on Jul 19, 2008 09:33 am (Chapter 20: Maybe You Should Like… Wait In The Cart)
I'm happy they're talking to each other again at least...and I'm crossing my fingers in hope that Dallas does go to Europe with him! Update again soon.

Author's Response: They are talking, so that's something haha as for Europe... we'll have to wait and see about that :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!



Vessy (Signed) on Jul 18, 2008 08:04 am (Chapter 20: Maybe You Should Like… Wait In The Cart)
great work!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot!



Sox (Signed) on Jul 17, 2008 10:27 pm (Chapter 20: Maybe You Should Like… Wait In The Cart)

Justin is WAY overprotective, especially since he won't admit he's in LOVE. haha He's not happy, Jess is annoying, and he doesn't even want her there. That's a bad sign when you only see your girlfriends a couple days a month and you're wishing she's not there the whole time. Justin is having some serious issues thinking about Veda not going on the tour. I love that he said the tour would suck with her, but his own personal experience on the tour would be unbearable. I think he's finally getting it. Now just get rid of Jess, have a nice chat with Dallas, get all your feelings out there, and you'll have an AMAZING European tour. haha 

Anyway, love the story, update soon :) 



Author's Response: haha that would be a good idea.. but maybe too easy lol Thanks for reading and reviewing



DaniD (Signed) on Jul 17, 2008 07:50 pm (Chapter 20: Maybe You Should Like… Wait In The Cart)

mmmhmm..Here Justin is worrying himself to death about whether Veda is going to Europe with him or not..and she's not even allowed to ride the bus with him anymore? Boys doesn't know what the hell he's doing. You know what they say...Absence makes the heart grow fonder. Maybe it will help Justin get his head out of his ass.

I loved the way Veda acted about how much Jess talked. Very funny commentary! lol  Great update!



Author's Response: lol yeah Justin has no idea what's going on. Thanks so much for reading :)





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