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Vessy (Signed) on Apr 26, 2007 10:14 am (Chapter 2)
nice


Colie Wilkinson (Anonymous) on Apr 25, 2007 08:50 pm (Chapter 2)
Hey, I really like the easy flow of the conversation between the characters. seems very realistic. just some criticism...sry if u dont want it...but fix ur grammtical errors, especially with the quotation and when people are talking.  looking forward to a new chapter! good job!




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