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Anonymous (Anonymous) on Aug 01, 2016 01:21 pm (Growing Up)
7 years??? Where's the update???
Nikki (Anonymous) on May 19, 2009 09:50 pm (Growing Up)
I really like the story and hope that you get back to the regular updates but I don't want to get caught up in the story again, just for there to be months time lapsed in between chapters. So, get your groove back and don't let us down.
Author's Response: I know, I know. It's like a relationship with your work and the readers. If you're not treating them right they leave you. But I am most definitely writing. Sorry for the hiatus. Thank you for reading. LOL. :")
Author's Response: I know, I know. It's like a relationship with your work and the readers. If you're not treating them right they leave you. But I am most definitely writing. Sorry for the hiatus. Thank you for reading. LOL. :")
Reshaye (Signed) on Mar 30, 2008 11:56 am (Growing Up)
The storyline is great....I can definitely see talent in your writing. My only criticism is that you really need a proofreader. The errors distract from the amazing story. If the story was edited properly it would completely off the chain!!! I'd totally proofread for you if you'd like. Having said all that, your story has really drawn me in and I've been waiting anxiously everyday for a new chapter! = )
Author's Response: i know that I have a major problem with proofing wat i put out, but i just ent through all of the chapters and cleaned them up a bit. But i wouldn't mind having a proof reader from time to time.
Author's Response: i know that I have a major problem with proofing wat i put out, but i just ent through all of the chapters and cleaned them up a bit. But i wouldn't mind having a proof reader from time to time.
rev0586 (Signed) on Mar 26, 2008 06:35 pm (Growing Up)
wow that was sooo hot lol... i love this phrase "Put me in." how much sexy can that get... u got me interested!!
