Comments For Control
SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Apr 04, 2008 06:39 pm (Who's in Control?)
wow...interesting!!! Very interesting
d_simplicity (Signed) on Mar 31, 2008 02:18 pm (Who's in Control?)
Oh this story is really good. Just a little crit - it just needs a little tweaking on the grammar - but still very good and I'm enjoying it a lot so update again soon! :)
Gigi (Signed) on Mar 30, 2008 04:42 pm (Who's in Control?)
Why was her momma even digging in her trash?!
Author's Response: Her momma ain't no joke. She always has one eye on O.
Author's Response: Her momma ain't no joke. She always has one eye on O.
rev0586 (Signed) on Mar 30, 2008 03:06 pm (Who's in Control?)
wel @ least hes taking responsbility 4 his baby, cuz i really thought he was gone make up som bs about the baby not being his.... btw luv how u updat =)
Author's Response: Thanks. I thought that it would be nice for him to be atleast responsible.
Author's Response: Thanks. I thought that it would be nice for him to be atleast responsible.
ygant (Anonymous) on Mar 30, 2008 09:14 am (Who's in Control?)
I'm lovin it oh so very much. If I don't review from tme to time...no worries, I'm still reading it. Sonrisa.
Author's Response: As long as you reading girl I'm cool.
Author's Response: As long as you reading girl I'm cool.
justinaham (Signed) on Mar 30, 2008 08:19 am (Who's in Control?)
OH GIRL....Sly is a sneaky little fucker, but he wouldn't have had to try and convince me. Lol
jacs12031984 (Signed) on Mar 30, 2008 08:07 am (Who's in Control?)
wow what a turn of events cant wait to see what happens with thier relationship.
