Comments For A Secret Love
Koralin_Timberlake (Signed) on Apr 06, 2008 01:06 am (Dream Girl)
Interesting beginning. I can already tell that this story holds a lot of potential. Definately keep it going. But, just some constructive criticism for you, don't forget to edit before posting as well as grammer and paragraph formations. Other than that, I'm likin it so far. Update soon
Author's Response: Thanxs for the constructive criticism it's much loved and welcomed, I just want to get the story out there for all to read.lol.. i'll update soon, thats a promise. Xx
Author's Response: Thanxs for the constructive criticism it's much loved and welcomed, I just want to get the story out there for all to read.lol.. i'll update soon, thats a promise. Xx
SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Apr 04, 2008 07:10 pm (Dream Girl)
wow....keep goin!!!
Author's Response: Thanxs for reading and supporting Xx
Author's Response: Thanxs for reading and supporting Xx
Gigi (Signed) on Apr 03, 2008 12:52 pm (Dream Girl)
I'm liking it already.
Author's Response: Great I have a fan already..lol Thanxs Gigi Xx
Author's Response: Great I have a fan already..lol Thanxs Gigi Xx
Marissa (Signed) on Apr 03, 2008 09:45 am (Dream Girl)
Good job, especially for your first time! A little more attention to editing/grammar and you'll have a really really awesome story here!
Author's Response: Thanxs Marissa, I'm glad you enjoyed it Xx
Author's Response: Thanxs Marissa, I'm glad you enjoyed it Xx
rev0586 (Signed) on Apr 02, 2008 11:46 pm (Dream Girl)
wow 4 a first timer ur pretty good @ this i like the forshadowing u used with that song, seems like justin is gone b the bad guy in the relationship
Author's Response: Thanxs:p I'm glad you like the story. That song sorta inspired me for this story, so we'll see where we go from here... more updates coming soon Xx
Author's Response: Thanxs:p I'm glad you like the story. That song sorta inspired me for this story, so we'll see where we go from here... more updates coming soon Xx
