Comments For Verdant
d_simplicity (Signed) on May 07, 2008 02:34 pm (Chapter 3)
Well, I read all three chaps so far and Damn! LOL this is different and edgy but I like it a lot and though Justin is a major asshole, I think he's becoming attached to Chloe. Maybe infatuated or obsessed? That could be dangerous esp if he starts trying to get at her outside the club. Hmmm...I'm wondering why he's even doing this with her...why he comes in and only asks for her. Oh and Brady is the cutest thing! hehe. Can't wait for more. Update soon.

Author's Response: Hmm... obsessed with Chloe? Interesting... haha Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you like it :)



xKiKix (Signed) on May 07, 2008 01:34 pm (Chapter 3)
yay chloe... she's standing her ground... but i cant wait for more... lol.... good chapter!!

Author's Response: Yeah, I guess she is to some extent lol Thanks for reading and reviewing :)



Vessy (Signed) on May 07, 2008 05:42 am (Chapter 3)
great chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!



SJane (Signed) on May 07, 2008 03:44 am (Chapter 3)
lol about time that girl had some control

Author's Response: Yeah I think Chloe has more control over the situation than she knows. Thanks for reading and reviewing!



LuLu (Signed) on May 06, 2008 11:22 pm (Chapter 3)
I think someone is getting a little attached. Chloe better be careful he might start making more appearances in her life outside of the club. Like showing up at her house. I don't think it would be too hard for him to get personal information on her - ie. an address.

Brady is too adorable. I glad Chloe has a son who's so loving and gives her happiness.

I'm seriously getting hooked on this story. More soon please!

Author's Response: It does seem like Justin is getting a little attached... we'll have to see how that turns out :) And Chloe is really lucky to have Brady... thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)



justinaham (Signed) on May 06, 2008 10:47 pm (Chapter 3)
I would let him fuck me for free tbqh

Author's Response: haha very true... thanks!



jacs12031984 (Signed) on May 06, 2008 09:45 pm (Chapter 3)
OMG I am loving it!!! Update soon please

Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm glad you like it :)



MissM69 (Signed) on May 06, 2008 09:12 pm (Chapter 3)

oh yeah girl is time to take charge and show him who's really in control :D

 



Author's Response: haha yes, it's about time :) Thanks for the review!



SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on May 06, 2008 09:06 pm (Chapter 3)
lol...chloe got some balls(in her mouth) but she finally told him no!

Author's Response: hahaha She sure does ;) Thanks for the review!





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