Comments For Verdant
MochaB (Signed) on Jul 29, 2008 06:24 pm (Chapter 15)
awwwww. :o) this budding good relationship is making me so happy! brady is just so cute and thinking about justin showing him how to tie his new tie just made me "awwwww" out loud. haha. thos brady and jt moments are so adorable. i'm so happy that chloe and jt are talking more openly now and i hope it continues. i can't wait to see what happens with Mr. McCartney either...if you write about that. haha. update soon please! :o)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for all the wonderful comments. I will be writing about Mr. McCartney... hopefully soon lol Thanks again!


kahnechick85 (Signed) on Jul 29, 2008 04:37 pm (Chapter 15)
I'm glad that she's starting to open up to him. She really needs to work on trusting him more, he's really trying. I love this, PMS

Author's Response: Justin is trying really hard, but so is Chloe. She just has a lot more at stake but she's trying, it's just going to take a little longer. Thanks so much for reading!


SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Jul 29, 2008 04:19 pm (Chapter 15)
wow...they are clicking again. chloe cant chicken out again....she know she like him

Author's Response: We'll see what happens :) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! 


Veruschka (Anonymous) on Jul 29, 2008 01:40 pm (Chapter 15)
Nice twist on the story, I like it.
I still would like to read more of the stuff you put in the first chapters, if you know what I mean (wink wink)

Author's Response: lol I know, I'm sorry I've been slacking with that haha I've been focusing on other areas, BUT they'll be some more soon, next chapter actually. I promise! :) Thanks for reading


wishful thinker (Signed) on Jul 29, 2008 01:06 pm (Chapter 15)

wow I like the back ground info :) it makes me understand why the characters Chloe and Justin are the way they are.

I had a huge smile when i realised you updated whoo. not to sound greedy but more please :) oh yeh so are they dating dating or are they just hanging out?



Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm so happy you're liking it. I'll try to update soon. 


Lily (Signed) on Jul 29, 2008 12:14 pm (Chapter 15)
I'm glad that they're being so honest. They have a lot in common, very similar home lives. Justin's great with Brady and he's good with Chloe, as for comforting her and everything. He seems to really want to make them happy. I'm a little worried that he's going to do something to mess it all up though lol. I hope not. But I want to know about Brady's dad. Great job, update soon!

Author's Response: They are very similar, I think that's what draws them to eachother. Thanks so much for reading!


DaniD (Signed) on Jul 29, 2008 10:15 am (Chapter 15)

No..not boring! It helps understand the characters and their reactions more.

Interesting parallel..I can totally see why Chloe appeals to Justin. Not only is she beautiful..but her relationship with her son mirrors Justin's close relationship with his Mom. She is everything to Brady...and in addition she has that in common with her own Mother being everything to her. I can see why Justin is making a real effort to be there for Brady too. He knows what it's like to need a male influence in your life.

So next chapter...McCartney? This should be interesting!



Author's Response: Yeah, exactly. Justin sees a lot of his own mother in Chloe, and sees a lot of himself in Brady. He knows what it's like and wants to break the cycle. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!


MissM69 (Signed) on Jul 29, 2008 08:49 am (Chapter 15)
not boring at all is good to understand chloe a little bit more great chapter can't wait for the next :)

Author's Response: Thanks a lot, I really appreciate it :)


Vessy (Signed) on Jul 29, 2008 06:07 am (Chapter 15)
good chapter! its good to get some background story.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! 


SJane (Signed) on Jul 29, 2008 03:15 am (Chapter 15)
absolutely adorable as usual girl. i love how open justin is with brady it makes for some sweet interactions

Author's Response: Thank you so much!




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