Comments For Verdant
MochaB (Signed) on Oct 12, 2008 04:49 pm (Chapter 27)
well...that went nicely. haha. i knew this bliss couldn't last too long. that really sucked. and now she gets home and freakin' gabe is there! this isn't good at all. nobody is there to protect her or help her, except the police, which means she and brady should run right back out that door and she needs to call them now. but i'm sure that won't happen. oh and this part: "I don’t know what the hell that’s about, what kind of things does he do on stage?" that made me laugh really hard. haha. i really can't wait to see what happens next. update soon! :o)

Author's Response: haha we'll see what happens, thanks so much for always reading and reviewing :)



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Oct 12, 2008 02:06 pm (Chapter 27)
aww their vacation was going so good. I liked the beginning and Justin was thoughtful about the Beatles thing. But I don't think she should have left. I guess I understand she was freaking out and didn't think it out but Justin should have fought harder for her to stay. And wtf about Gabe? GOD. I'm scared lol update soon



Whtny (Anonymous) on Oct 11, 2008 03:20 pm (Chapter 27)
oh how did i know that the sht was about to hit the friggin fan..dmn

Author's Response: yes, it sure did. Thanks for reading! :)



kahnechick85 (Signed) on Oct 11, 2008 11:27 am (Chapter 27)
She overreacted and now she's gonna get herself in more trouble than if she would have just stayed with Justin where she was safe. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS

Author's Response: Thanks for reading, she did overreact a little but Justin kind of underreacted to haha is that a word? I don't think so. Oh well, I'll try to update soon!



alimera (Signed) on Oct 11, 2008 09:26 am (Chapter 27)
Yeah, if that wasn't predictable. Ugh. Why why why would she leave Justin's side and go home when she had asshole Gabe waiting for her there? Yeah, smart move Chloe. Now what the hell are you going to do? Ugh again. Update again soon!

Author's Response: Chloe doesn't always think things all the way through lol. Thanks for reading, I'll hopefully update soon! :)



Vessy (Signed) on Oct 11, 2008 08:25 am (Chapter 27)
omg, you really know how to make interesting endings :) good work!

Author's Response: haha yeah sorry for the cliffhanger. Thanks for reading! :)



LuLu (Signed) on Oct 11, 2008 12:10 am (Chapter 27)
Wow it just went from bad to worse for Chloe and Brady.

Chloe had even right to react the way she did and Justin should have been more understanding. I don't know if he's really grasped what it takes to be with a woman with a child. If he and Chloe are on board for a long term relationship, I think Justin needs to have a talk with his own stepdad about the relationship that's forming between him and Brady.

Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: That would be a very good idea lol we'll see what happens. Thanks for reading and reviewing!



JoJo (Anonymous) on Oct 10, 2008 11:53 pm (Chapter 27)
WOW!! Definitely can't wait for the next one!! Update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! 



MissTasha (Signed) on Oct 10, 2008 11:27 pm (Chapter 27)
Oh. Shit. Please update soon.

Author's Response: lol Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'll try to update soon :)



jacs12031984 (Signed) on Oct 10, 2008 11:14 pm (Chapter 27)
wow what a way to leave us hanging update soon please!!! need to know what happens

Author's Response: yeah, sorry about the cliffhanger lol. Thanks for the review, I'll work on updating soon :)





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