OMG!!! I don't even know where to start. I started reading this story @ about 1am, got in a the first 15 chapters then went to bed. I came home from work @ 6pm and I've been reading pretty much since. I can't even tell you how good this story is. It's like, so real life and you can lose that in the romance and wonder of fanfic. This is probably one of the best stories I've read personally. I have many more opinions on the characters and I'll tell you some of them...
Chloe: At first, I was put off by how she kept questioning herself but when I learned about her mom and her upbringing it made sense. I just wish she learned to trust more because everyone needs a strong person to help them in their lives.
Justin: Loved the fact that he's willing to help take care of her...well, until the last few chapters. I hope it'll work out though.
Brady: So flipping cute!!!
Amazing story, keep going...lol!
Ki
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm so glad you like it and I love to hear all your opinions so keep them coming :) Thanks a lot!
Author's Response: :( I know, poor Brady. haha Chloe is a little crazy, but she's just doing what she thinks she has to. I'm about to update in a minute. Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: Of course she's going back there haha did you expect anything different? Thanks for the review I'm about to update right now!
Author's Response: Justin isn't really thinking, he didn't mean to hurt anyone he was just doing what the thought was best. Obviously he's very wrong haha thanks for the review!
Author's Response: So very true... not the sharpest tool in the shed haha thanks for the review!
good update...update soon!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Author's Response: Yes, it sure does. Justin didn't exactly think everything through. Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: hmm... maybe lol thanks for the review!
Author's Response: lol yeah she is a whiner, but she's trying her best. Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: whoa, please don't hurt him hahaha He didn't think it through, but I agree he needs to have someone shake him up a little haha. Thanks for the review!
nnnooooooooooo! god damn it Chloe! just take his money, there's nothing wrong with charity ok? swallow your damn pride and take the money.
omgomgomgomg! justin needs to come home and fix this. he needs to fix this. you need to fix this.
my poor brady. he is too young to be experiencing such a heartbreak. :( ... seriously, that's the most heaviest thing about all this.
oh wow... i dont even know how things can get better, but they need to stop getting worse.
but i love this! lol! update soon!
Author's Response: Yeah, Brady is the worst part of this lol. Justin needs to think through his actions more, but so does Chloe, they're both screwed up and perfect for eachother haha thanks for the review!
More soon please!
Author's Response: haha Tiny and Trace should totally kick his ass. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
GAHHH! Please tell me Justin has a logical reason for pulling this shit after alllllllllllllll what they done been through and back. OMG! If not, I think we all need to gang up on him and give him a good wooping. I'm just saying. Damn him.
Poor Brady. That child is so adorable, he does not deserve this at all! And I feel for Chloe too. Jusitn was the only other strength she had. I mean, everyone needs somebody sometimes. Guh I'm so mad. And Now she's going to go back to that club???? I hope everything turns out ok. I'm still nervous about Gabe. Anyway, can't wait to see where this goes and how it all ends. They deserve a happy ending miss author...*points finger*...yes I said it. hehe I'm just playing lol. Glad I finally got time to catch up again. Love it! Update soon.
P.S Love the banners too. :)
Author's Response: lol everybody should gang up and get him. haha I'll try and give them their happy ending, but sometimes that's not how it all happens in the real world lol. Thanks for the review! And yay Vikki for the banners, I know they're amazing :)
