Comments For Verdant
Lily (Signed) on Nov 20, 2008 12:22 pm (Chapter 34)
OK, I don't hate Justin anymore. I don't think he should have gone behind her back to get the info from the hospital but I don't think he was trying to be sneaky. He's just trying to figure everything out. He's a good guy and I think he'll take good care of her and Brady. I LOVED the beginning part with Brady, he is too adorable. I was laughing when he was saying how Rachael and Trace are going to get married haha cute. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yeah, Justin's just trying to figure everything out for himself since Chloe isn't really helping him too much haha. 



Becca Lynn (Signed) on Nov 20, 2008 11:44 am (Chapter 34)

nice chapter. I'm happy that we learned what actually happened. I was a tiny bit confused at the end of the last chapter. I love this story, once it is completely done, I think I'm gonna reread the whole thing. Heck maybe ill start now! lol 

:D 



Author's Response: haha well thank you so very much, it's a long one so get nice and comfy haha



MissTasha (Signed) on Nov 20, 2008 11:30 am (Chapter 34)
I'm still mad at him. He shouldn't be digging all into her business like that. *scowl* It's so bad but when she thought about running away, I was like "Woohoo!" I wanted the drama. lol. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Justin was just trying to get everything straightened out since Chloe wasn't really being much of a help. I think she kind of needed him to do that so she could accept his help. Don't worry, you know there will be more drama ;) we can't let everything go that easy. Thanks for the review!



alimera (Signed) on Nov 20, 2008 11:25 am (Chapter 34)
Well I'm glad he listened to her and didn't freak out...she needs his protection! Update again soon.

Author's Response: She didn't freak out yet, lol thanks for reading!



SJane (Signed) on Nov 20, 2008 07:41 am (Chapter 34)
Damn that poor girl seriously u have to feel for her

Author's Response: Yes, she can't catch a break thanks for reading and reviewing!



kahnechick85 (Signed) on Nov 20, 2008 02:20 am (Chapter 34)
Well I'm glad that he came back and talked to her. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS.

Author's Response: thanks so much!



lance_fan_4eva (Signed) on Nov 20, 2008 01:58 am (Chapter 34)
awe, J is so understanding!  more soon!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!



Elizabeth (Anonymous) on Nov 15, 2008 09:49 pm (Chapter 33)
Awesome!!!  I can not wait to read more

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I hope to update soon!



Tash2 (Signed) on Nov 14, 2008 10:26 pm (Chapter 1)
I loved you as a writer and i'm a huge fan but if you don't fix this shit cause that's what is is a bunch of stinky smelly fucking shit ans she don't deserve it. She love her son son't llet them snow ball her and she lose hi,. What the fuck is wrong with Justinb he better be doing something good instead joining gabe or i'm coming for a chunk of his ass too*wait that might be sexy* no i'm losing focus. fix this cause she soon ain't gon have nobody if Justin believes this  and i'm thinking he might. She should have told him. Update Update Update oh yeah and update!

Author's Response: hahaha that sounds like a threat Try to stay calm lol I don't want to say anything else... but thanks for reading and I'm glad you're getting so attached with the characters lol



Lily (Signed) on Nov 14, 2008 06:50 pm (Chapter 33)
OMG when Justin wanted them to turn the mics of so Chloe couldn't hear them... I want to jump through the screen and slap him lol I really really hope Justin's not going to be an idiot with that. I mean, let's face it Chloe isn't exactly the most stable person in the world but she needs his help. He better help her! And not be an asshole, that would help too lol Update!!!!!

Author's Response: I know! I wanted to slap him too and I wrote it hahaha. Thanks for the review!



mzmillion (Signed) on Nov 14, 2008 12:11 pm (Chapter 33)
oh shit shit shit....this chapter pretty much says she is fucked and the way its setup, it would have to be a miracle for her to get out this with Brady and Justin, and I hate miracles and I can already tell this is what is going to happen, something mysterious...ugh!! lol...it was a good chapter though, well written.

Author's Response: lol mysterious? I don't know about all that. Thanks for reading and reviewing!



Vessy (Signed) on Nov 14, 2008 08:07 am (Chapter 33)
wow, I think you are going into a very cool direction, its more and more interesting! Good job!

Author's Response: Cool, thank you!



Quincyluv (Signed) on Nov 14, 2008 03:07 am (Chapter 33)

weird twiat... i like it.

 

now im trying to figure out whats been going on all along.

 

brilliant.



Author's Response: thanks so much, I thought I'd twist it up a little haha thanks for reading!



Becca Lynn (Signed) on Nov 14, 2008 12:34 am (Chapter 33)
This chapter made me sad. I want it turn out ok, but I'm not sure if that will happen. I had such hope at the end of the last chapter.....I just hope the next chapter is a little more positive. Justin better not turn on Chloe! I feel bad for her. :(

Author's Response: Thanks for reading, I'm sorry that chapter wasnt too happy. I can't make any promises on the next lol. 



SJane (Signed) on Nov 13, 2008 11:10 pm (Chapter 33)
oh shiz and the oscar goes to... damn Chloe sure has been threw some shit.
d/w girl your stuck with me as a reader until the end lol

Author's Response: lol thanks for sticking with me :)





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