Comments For Water, Water Everywhere
SexualCoco (Signed) on May 10, 2008 03:25 pm (I learned the truth at seventeen...)
Wow...I am seriously sitting here with my mouth hanging open. What a crazy ass coincidence and yes, thank god she didn't sleep with him. I think you're off to a great start for your first story. Keep it up, can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: lol I'm so glad you like it.
Author's Response: lol I'm so glad you like it.
mandycherie (Signed) on May 10, 2008 01:14 pm (I learned the truth at seventeen...)
Interesting start, I can't wait to see what Justin's reaction is!
rev0586 (Signed) on May 10, 2008 01:13 pm (I learned the truth at seventeen...)
OM freaking goodness!!! i luv this story!! lol... this was a GREAT 1st ch. that has left me with wanting more!!! WOW ahhhh i wana know what happens now! lol
Author's Response: I'm so glad you do!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you do!
a_nonymous (Signed) on May 10, 2008 12:56 pm (I learned the truth at seventeen...)
OH.MY.GOD. Haha, I love this story already!
Author's Response: Woot woot!
Author's Response: Woot woot!
d_simplicity (Signed) on May 10, 2008 11:36 am (I learned the truth at seventeen...)
WOW...great start. This should make for a very interesting story. I think somewhere in there Justin was engaged too right? lol hahahaha can't wait to see what happens. All hell is going to break loose eh? lol update soon. I like it so far. :)
Author's Response: Very observant!
Author's Response: Very observant!
Fatone (Signed) on May 10, 2008 11:13 am (I learned the truth at seventeen...)
Author's Response: How many times have I heard that very sentence? In a slightly.... different context. lol
such a tease! cant wait to read more...
Author's Response: How many times have I heard that very sentence? In a slightly.... different context. lol
true_self (Signed) on May 10, 2008 11:09 am (I learned the truth at seventeen...)
Two words: So good!!!!! I love the humor in the story, seriously the scene when she's imagining who could kill her sister I was dying with laughter. And I love the portrayl of Justin - dead on or at least who I imagine him to be. I love Kiki too. And now that Kiki's dad is going to marry Justin's mom that would make them step-siblings. I can't wait to see how this turns out. Please give me the next chapter soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the feedback! I actually wrote this a few years ago and haven't looked at it, since, but I came back and read it and was laughing so much. I couldn't believe I'd forgotten about it. Anyway, you rock!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the feedback! I actually wrote this a few years ago and haven't looked at it, since, but I came back and read it and was laughing so much. I couldn't believe I'd forgotten about it. Anyway, you rock!
MissM69 (Signed) on May 10, 2008 10:56 am (I learned the truth at seventeen...)
OMG can't wait for Justin to mind out and read about what his reaction will be when he does :D
SJane (Signed) on May 10, 2008 10:42 am (I learned the truth at seventeen...)
Lol oh my I can't wait to see what justin reaction will be
JustinsAngel (Signed) on May 10, 2008 09:39 am (I learned the truth at seventeen...)
Wow, I can't wait for Justin to find out about this... Update soon
