WastedHeadspace (Signed) on May 26, 2008 03:24 pm (Torn in Two)
I'm really enjoying this story! At first I was kind of doubtful about the whole disguise thing but you've convinced me! Can't wait for more :)



Reshaye (Signed) on May 23, 2008 12:17 am (Torn in Two)
This is my favorite story online right now and trust me I read alot! Love the storyline...love the characters. You really know how to end a chapter leaving the reader wanting more. I'm looking forward to the next update. All I've got to say is keep doing what you're doing....you are a natural writer and you never know where it might take you in the future. You're a badass, fo sheezy!



classicbeauty (Signed) on May 23, 2008 12:07 am (Torn in Two)
Girl you have a great imagation, because i promise you some of the big brother things justin does so my brother. homemade coco, always buggin you and big head! i so could hear him callin me that, or visa versa.

this is a huge dilemma here, i thought he figure it out by now, but i guess not. i love the whole idea, but i cant help but wonder if while shes fucking him can she see him flashbacks of earlier when he was all big bro on her. eww

cants wait for more, like i need some by saturday at the latest!

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your much derseved stars
Dani

P.S. Thank you for the update, i read it before i went shopping. kept a huge smile on my face while i spent way more money then i planned today, but its for the ones i love so why the hell not right? Anywho, I got the 17yr old a Coach purse and the 13 yr old a Dooney Bourke wristlet, their bdays are coming up in the next few days. they saw i bought myself one and wanted one too. they've been good this year in school and at home, they dont know i got it for them, so this should be a nice surpise.



MissM69 (Signed) on May 22, 2008 10:04 pm (Torn in Two)
I'm at the edge of my chair reading this simply awesome can't wait for the next update :D

Author's Response: YAY! Thanks for the reviewing Missy!



ChaseznLuccaLover (Signed) on May 22, 2008 07:55 pm (Torn in Two)
Man, how does he not know that they are the same person. I would think it would be obvious based on how I picture Kiki and/or Nicole to look.

Bet Justin isn't going to be very happy though if he finds out the truth.

Author's Response: It's funny the way the mind will believe whatever it wants to, even if something is staring it right in the face. lol Thanks for reviewing Lucca Lover! mwah



a_nonymous (Signed) on May 22, 2008 04:04 pm (Torn in Two)
Holy fuck I love this story! : )

Author's Response: And I love you! Thanks for reviewing! Woot!



mandycherie (Signed) on May 22, 2008 01:58 pm (Torn in Two)
Huh, that took a turn I wasn't expecting. Can't wait for Justin to catch Kiki in her lie.

Author's Response: lol I can't wait, either. Thanks for reviewing mandy!



Vessy (Signed) on May 22, 2008 01:41 pm (Torn in Two)
awesome!

Author's Response: Thank you!



MissTasha (Signed) on May 22, 2008 01:35 pm (Torn in Two)
Sex! Sex! Sex! This makes me very happy. If they don't do it this time, I'm gonna be pissed. LOL. Please update soon.

Author's Response: LMFAO! Thanks for the review Tasha, and your wish just may be my command! ;)





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