Comments For Water, Water Everywhere
WastedHeadspace (Signed) on May 26, 2008 03:24 pm (Torn in Two)
I'm really enjoying this story! At first I was kind of doubtful about the whole disguise thing but you've convinced me! Can't wait for more :)
Reshaye (Signed) on May 23, 2008 12:17 am (Torn in Two)
This is my favorite story online right now and trust me I read alot! Love the storyline...love the characters. You really know how to end a chapter leaving the reader wanting more. I'm looking forward to the next update. All I've got to say is keep doing what you're doing....you are a natural writer and you never know where it might take you in the future. You're a badass, fo sheezy!
classicbeauty (Signed) on May 23, 2008 12:07 am (Torn in Two)
Girl you have a great imagation, because i promise you some of the big brother things justin does so my brother. homemade coco, always buggin you and big head! i so could hear him callin me that, or visa versa.
this is a huge dilemma here, i thought he figure it out by now, but i guess not. i love the whole idea, but i cant help but wonder if while shes fucking him can she see him flashbacks of earlier when he was all big bro on her. eww
cants wait for more, like i need some by saturday at the latest!
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your much derseved stars
Dani
P.S. Thank you for the update, i read it before i went shopping. kept a huge smile on my face while i spent way more money then i planned today, but its for the ones i love so why the hell not right? Anywho, I got the 17yr old a Coach purse and the 13 yr old a Dooney Bourke wristlet, their bdays are coming up in the next few days. they saw i bought myself one and wanted one too. they've been good this year in school and at home, they dont know i got it for them, so this should be a nice surpise.
this is a huge dilemma here, i thought he figure it out by now, but i guess not. i love the whole idea, but i cant help but wonder if while shes fucking him can she see him flashbacks of earlier when he was all big bro on her. eww
cants wait for more, like i need some by saturday at the latest!
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your much derseved stars
Dani
P.S. Thank you for the update, i read it before i went shopping. kept a huge smile on my face while i spent way more money then i planned today, but its for the ones i love so why the hell not right? Anywho, I got the 17yr old a Coach purse and the 13 yr old a Dooney Bourke wristlet, their bdays are coming up in the next few days. they saw i bought myself one and wanted one too. they've been good this year in school and at home, they dont know i got it for them, so this should be a nice surpise.
MissM69 (Signed) on May 22, 2008 10:04 pm (Torn in Two)
I'm at the edge of my chair reading this simply awesome can't wait for the next update :D
Author's Response: YAY! Thanks for the reviewing Missy!
Author's Response: YAY! Thanks for the reviewing Missy!
ChaseznLuccaLover (Signed) on May 22, 2008 07:55 pm (Torn in Two)
Man, how does he not know that they are the same person. I would think it would be obvious based on how I picture Kiki and/or Nicole to look.
Bet Justin isn't going to be very happy though if he finds out the truth.
Author's Response: It's funny the way the mind will believe whatever it wants to, even if something is staring it right in the face. lol Thanks for reviewing Lucca Lover! mwah
Bet Justin isn't going to be very happy though if he finds out the truth.
Author's Response: It's funny the way the mind will believe whatever it wants to, even if something is staring it right in the face. lol Thanks for reviewing Lucca Lover! mwah
a_nonymous (Signed) on May 22, 2008 04:04 pm (Torn in Two)
Holy fuck I love this story! : )
Author's Response: And I love you! Thanks for reviewing! Woot!
Author's Response: And I love you! Thanks for reviewing! Woot!
mandycherie (Signed) on May 22, 2008 01:58 pm (Torn in Two)
Huh, that took a turn I wasn't expecting. Can't wait for Justin to catch Kiki in her lie.
Author's Response: lol I can't wait, either. Thanks for reviewing mandy!
Author's Response: lol I can't wait, either. Thanks for reviewing mandy!
MissTasha (Signed) on May 22, 2008 01:35 pm (Torn in Two)
Sex! Sex! Sex! This makes me very happy. If they don't do it this time, I'm gonna be pissed. LOL. Please update soon.
Author's Response: LMFAO! Thanks for the review Tasha, and your wish just may be my command! ;)
Author's Response: LMFAO! Thanks for the review Tasha, and your wish just may be my command! ;)