Author's Response: Guh I KNOW!!! i'd never written Justin's grandfather before and it was a really interesting dynamic. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: YAY thanks! Yeah the first half of the next chapter should be up this weekend. Just waiting on edits. Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: I KNOW!!! I'm almost done with this next chapter and since it's so long I've already sent the first half out for edits. It will be within the next few weeks or so. Thanks for sticking with me and thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
I must say this is one of my fave stories to read im looking forward to an update and the rest of the story and I love the characters although i can relate to only one in this story and thats nither justin or ameila
Author's Response: Thank you I'm glad you're liking it! I'm hoping my life slows down a little and I'm able to really work on my update. I'm about half way done I just have to sit down and pound it out! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
I thought we had 8 more chapters? Where are they?
<Dee chants> Update, update, update...
Please, please, please.
I hope everything is well with you.
Take care!Author's Response: We doooo have eight more chapters and they are in my brain fighting to get out. Between moving and moving AGAIN and job searching i've really kind of fallen behind but I'm hoping to get on track here soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: I'm working on the next chapter right this minute. Its giving me a bit of a fit but I think I just gotta get back in the swing of it. Thank you for your patience and thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Ok, I've been reading this since you began it and it started out really good, great even. But it has since started to annoy me to no end. The plot is nothing but this back and forth game and doesn't feel believable or honest anymore. I can't see any of these characters actually acting like this. Charlotte, who I used to really like is now this spineless, whiny girl with no brain. Amelia is so one dimensional and she gives me a nails on the chalkboard feeling. And Justin. UGH. At this point, both girls need to leave him. He's gotten so much worse for me as this goes on. I don't know what the original outline had for him but he's just a waste of space with no balls. I don't know if that was the intention you were going for but I hope not. I wish he had a backbone and man up. I'm really sorry but I just can't keep reading this. It just feels like, I don't know. Maybe you keep writing for the sake of reviews, not to tell a good story.
Author's Response: I'm sorry that you are no longer enjoying the story but what you're saying about the characters is pretty much what I want you to be feeling. This story has been an exploration in character and how people interact with each other and bring out the best and in this case the worst in each other. It will be picking up within the next several chapters but if you want to quit reading I understand. Thank you for your concern and for reading and reviewing.
Author's Response: the update is about a third of the way done now and I hope to be able to work on it some over the weekend. Life is just kinda crazy right now *sigh* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: YES he's getting a lot of advice in a short period of time and just a lot of people telling him what to do in general. He needs to just figure his shit out and take responsibility for his life. Ugh he's annoying ME and i'm the one that shaped him hahaha. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: No don't die!!! I'm in my last quarter of school and things are getting really crazy around here so I have no idea when the next update will come. Stay tuned! Thanks fo rreading and reviewing!!!
You know your papa would NEVER stear you in the wrong direction. Going home always helps to clear your mind and give you a swift kick in the bootay! Now we just have to keep our fingers crossed and hope that what Billy has said to J has him picking the right way. :) :) Can't wait for the next chapter! I need some interaction!
Author's Response: Yes yes grandparents have a way of sayin things just right. Billy was such a fun character to write. I promise there will be more interaction! thanks for reading and reviewing.
Oh goodness. Not too much action in this one, but Justin STILL waffling about who to choose. He reminds me of a little boy in this chapter...so unsure about everything.
His grandpa? Awesome. When I'm old, I want to be spry and threatening to beat my grandkids into shape! (Okay, not really, but...) Maybe he'll really talk some sense into him? At the least, he got his yard mowed!
Author's Response: YES EXACTLY. Going home always makes you feel like a little kid and you always run home when you don't know where else to go *sigh* Poor J. You really can only pity him. And yes Billy got his lawn pimped hahaha. Thanks for reading and reveiwing!!!
Author's Response: YAY I'm glad youliked it! Here's hoping Justin actually takes some of this good advice lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: YAY thank you! its kind of leading into everything else but I'm happy with it Only eight more! I'm excited/nervous haha Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Ahhh! I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: OMG SCRATCH HIS WATCH OR WIND HIS BUTT HAHAHAHAHA Seriously that was AWESOME!!! Charlotte will be back that much I can promise but little else. The next eight chapters are gonna be a bit of a rollercoaster. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!