Author's Response: This was the moment that I'd been waiting for the entire time I was writing this story. I was really excited to see everyone's reactions to it haha.
WHAT?!?!?!?!? You have GOT to be kidding me. I am going to kick Justin's ass so far into next year it'll make his head spin. Oh. My. GOD!
What an IDIOT!
Girl...you've got me so damn hooked on this story that I can't stop reading and managed to read all the way through from last night until now. Sleep, be damned.
But...UGH. Amelia is all kinds of WRONG for him. and Charlotte is just so...FUCK he's blind as a bat. You really had me thinking that he was going to say that he couldn't go through with it. DAMMIT.
Author's Response: Holy crap that's quite the feat dude! This story is a beast as far as length. Justin is seriously such a retard in this story. Like he annoys ME and I "created" him haha. Glad you took the time to catch up and that you're liking it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Here's a suggestion! Instead of cutting or editing you should write deleted scenes so it kinda has a solution and that way its not necessary. =)
I'm seriously gonna miss this story once its over.
Author's Response: That's a pretty good idea. I might do that when I finally finish this beast haha. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: I JUST broke through this serious block I've been having with the latest chapter. Things are going well and I'm hoping its going to be soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
So, I never write reviews, but I felt the need to tell you that you've officially ruined my love of fanfic (stay with me here...) NOTHING compares to this story... Usually I read a shorter story in between updates, but now they all seem cheesey in comparison! I lose interest in them so I keep re reading this one until updates come!
SO, my sanity will forever love you if you plan on updating someone soon :) I lovvvve this story!
Author's Response: Wow thank you so much! That is such a wonderful compliment and I'm really glad you're enjoying the story. I'm about halfway done with the next update but I just got my first job and moved across the country so life kinda got crazy on me. But hopefully it will be soon! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
NOOOOOOO. FREEEAKING. WAAAAAAY!! I can NOT believe I just read those two words. He took what his grandpa said the completely wrong way! I am seriously almost in tears. This is so ridiculous! HE is ridiculous! Reading the start I was hoping that charlie would just go and say what she had to say and I'm glad she did even though it probably felt like complete hell for her with the lack of reaction she got. At least, as trace said, she won't regret it later. I know I say how weak she is, but that doesn't mean she's deserved this hurt and pain that she's gone through. Yes she has brought it on herself, but gosh she's a good person! Too good obviously with what she has put up with from justin and amelia. And now that the shock has worn off, I'm glad he went ahead and said I do. I wanted charlie and justin to be together. I didn't, but there was always a small part of me that did. That had hope that he'd wake up. I wanted him to just stop being stupid and be honest with himself and stop hiding from himself. But he is such a lie and she just revealed her heart to him and he still goes through with it so I'm done. I don't want them together at all because what he's put charlie through in unforgivable. If charlie ever talks to him again I want her to show how strong she is and how he's going to regret not being with her. I reeeally want that. She needs her moment of strength and confidence before this is all said and done. Ugh. Wow. So glad I finally could read it. What a chapter woman. I love you. Lol update soon! :o)
Author's Response: Okay I really liked your review because of the range of emotion you showed. Like how you went from being in shock to really thinking about what happened to Charlotte and what justin put her through. It was nice to actually SEE that transition because that's really what I was going for with this chapter. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
AAAAAAAAA....... Why Would He Say "I DO" What Is Wrong With Him?! Seriously What Is It Gonna Take For Him To Open His Eyes And See That Charlotte Is The One For Him!!!!! GRRRRRR..... But I Absolutly Love This Story.....Cant Get Enough!!!! When Is The Next Update?
Author's Response: The next update is coming slowly. I keep writing and it keeps turning out wrong. BUT! i think I figured out my issue and hopefully *crosses fingers* it will go more smoothly. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
“We raised you to stand up and take responsibility, and you have and we’re proud but boy you run.”
(wasn't it grandpa?) DID NOT mean for Justin to take it like this. I mean, he could still get it annulled? *sigh*
Author's Response: That's what's so damn frustrating about Justin. He's getting all the right advice but interpreting it in the TOTALLY wrong way *smacks him* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
delicious chapter. Awesome job at dragging it out. ::sigh:: we'll see where this ends up for him. Y'know, there was a point in the story where I had to applaud you for making Amelia a villain, but not giving JT the "Clean" out of her cheating or something that would make his choice easy or more obvious. Seriously, that's a atough choice. Because this JT? I would want no parts of this... what's Trace call him? A "pansy assed motherfucker."
oh, who'm I kidding. Codependent!Justin is awesome! He's no Boxer!Justin, but... ;)
Author's Response: That's what I love about this story. None of the characters have an easy out. Amelia's a bitch, Justin is a pansy ass, and Charlotte is doormat lol It's going to be fun over the next few chapters to see how everything pans out for them. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
Okay, can I just say A-FREAKING-MAZING update here! :-)
So, I wanted to make my review as an open letter to Justin but seeing as how he didn't see the writing on Charlie's face, I'm going to assume he won't take any heed to words regardless of who they are from.
As I got further into the chapter, I knew he wasn't going to back down. Justin has this thing for the familiar. He likes for things to not change. The only inconsistency he seems to like is his music. If the style of music changes, he's alright but any form of disruption to the normalacy in his life, oh no, it's the end. Time to go! Do not pass go! Do not ride the reading to boardwalk. Do not collect $200. Lol. Amelia, (I'm not going to call her Roxy for the simple fact, Roxy died as soon as she became HBIC) is not the same person Justin met those years ago. As he asked her all of those questions and didn't answer them, it made me wonder why he tried so hard to make it work and then it hit me...
Justin just doesn't want to change. If he did, he would've made the attempt to call off the wedding for good. He would consciously recognize that he isn't happy and do whatever will make him happy. That is what Charlie represents and what he resents in a way. Charlie was able to take control and begin to move on from their affair and that is what drove him crazy. That's why I think Justin said I do. He knows Amelia is consistent. Charlie, for him, is not.
Well, that's my review. Lol. I really want to take Justin by his Armani collar and drag him out of the church, into Manhattan traffic, and just go across the bridge to Connecticut and hide him in a warehouse. That would be beneficial to everyone.
Author's Response: EXACTLY. He's got some kind of idea in his head that THIS is the wayhis life is supposed to go and for some reason he's stuck on it and won't freakin let it go *smacks him* I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
And can I just say that Charlie freaking broke my heart! I mean seriously! God I could see it playing in my head and I was like ALMOST in tears! Here she is handing him what's left of her heart that she had that Justin didn't already have just got it ALL handed back to her and shoved in her face? God that really broke my heart.
And Trace? Can you write me in and have me marry Trace in Justin and Roxy's place?? Cuz that would just stinking amazing. "Race you back down the altar." I can seriously hear him saying that. Justin should have listened to him and went after Charlie. Because I would really like too see Trace and Rachel calling off that wedding. God that would be priceless! She probably would have been pushed into on coming traffic, and you missed the oppurtunity to write that in! LOL. Just kidding, all around you did an AMAZING job. I can't wait to read what happens next even if it means I don't get to see the happy ending I wanted. You are seriously an amazing writer. As if I haven't said that before. And now that I have wrote you a novel...
Author's Response: I think that was my favorite part of this section was the fact that the one time it would have been okay to run and he didn't. And Trace is probably my favorite character to write. He's so goofy and irreverant and I luff him. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
He WHAT?! No, he did not say I do. This must be some type of dream. Update, please?
As always, you are an amazing writer; but you cant leave us here without updating for such a long time missy. =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I've already started the next chapter and it's going really well so I'm HOPING that because we're really coming up on the end that it will go smoother. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
Author's Response: I know Justin's in for a world of hurt. *smacks him* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: My thoughts exactly hahaha. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
