This is awesome so far.
I love how playful Justin is and Charlotte is endearing, though I do wish there were more moments of her being herself (ie calling Amelia out on her moods accidentally on the phone) with Justin and less politeness, but I s'pose that will come in time.
You have very distinct characters, which is a nice rarity in fanfic.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! That's really good to hear because the characters is one of the things I'm kind of struggling with through this next ypdated. Its good to hear that I'm on the right track. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: YAY!!! I'm so glad you're liking it!!! The next chapter should be up in the next week or so. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: Aw Thanks!!! Writing Amelia is fun because she's SO over the top hahaha. I'm glad you're liking it!!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: HAHAHAH Hopefully it won't disappoint. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: Guh indeed she is! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Too bad we can't reach through the screen and wrap our hands around Amelia's neck. Eesh. Love it!
Author's Response: HAHAHAHA Guh if only!!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: HAHAHA Yeah Amelia is a pill. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: Guh yes its about time those two had some qaulity time.... *giggle* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: HAHAHAHA don't we ALL. Seriously the boy needs to grow a pair. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: HAHAHAHAHA bish you KNOW it!!! Amelia's loony...hope Justin realizes it before its too late!!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Ok I have a theory. Ameila fell on her head as a baby one too many times and as a result any kind and positive emotions she could exude were locked away in some far regions of her brain. hahaha. No but seriously, was she always like this? I refuse to believe a person is like this on a regular just for being so. There must be some back story. Lol That shit was appalling, sad and hilarious at the same time. I was litterally sitting there chanting "Say something Justin! Stand up for yourself you goofball! You punk! Softie!" lol And then he said something, not much, but something which made it clear that Amelia is pushing his buttons just a little bit too far. This is getting interesting. Me thinks it won't be long before he even starts questioning this wedding.
And making Charlotte his assistant? What's that about? hmm. Maybe Amelia did it on the spur of the moment since he needs one as she states but if i was Charlotte i'd be careful. We all know how the bride to be has been 'setting Justin up.' Miss Charlotte needs to grow some more backbone me thinks too. But yay! on her and Justin getting to spend time together. Hopefully, this will lead to very good things yes. Ignoring any drama that might arise. Very, very good things for Charltin. :D. Update soon girl.
Author's Response: HAHAHAHA well if I've got you talking to the screen I must me doing something right! I always look forward to your thoughts on my chapters!!! Thanks for taking the time to read and review!!!
Author's Response: Sounds like a good plan to me!!! I'll try and convince him of that hahahah thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: HAHAHA HE IS A WIMP!!!!!! Amelia has full on domesticated him the poor guy. Maybe he'll snap out of it....maaaaaybe not...who knows *whistles* Hahaha Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
i have some very interesting theories as to why Amelia is acting like such a...
ugh... Heather that was too short. I can't wait to see what happens during this week Charlotte is working with him. Shes never gonna wanna go back to Amelias office... for more then one reason I'm sure.
Author's Response: Yesssss Ally I'm sure you are very right. Who knows what's in store for Justin and Charlotte... Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Now, this is the beginning of Charltin!!!
Am I right???????
Author's Response:
This may very well be the beginning of something that could possibly be called Charltin...maybe *shifty eyes*
haha Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
