Well, that was just absolutely horrid. lol. What terrible sex. But you wrote it so well. hehe.
I mean, I feel bad for not just Justin but Amelia because something is wrong with her to be like that with this man. Please tell us what it is soon. Is she having an affair? What? Why is she like that?! OMG it's so sad. They can't possibly get married. That's like Justin signing his death warrant. He needs more than that. He deserves more than Amelia treating him like some little boy instead of her man. He can't have her ruling him like this and I think the fact that he has to constantly remind himself of the past and that he loves her just proves that he's falling out of love with her. I'm sorry but he's grasping for straws here. Sure he loved her once but now...now it's like he's acting out of duty. What's love got to do with it? OMG I just...my mouth was gaped open like holy shit...and the sad part is there are people out there exactly like that. lol. hahaha.
It's time for Justin to realise that he don't just like Charlotte. It's time for something...compromising to happen between them to make him rethink this 'union'. hehehe but again, I love it and hope you update soon. :-)
Author's Response: I never thought I would be happy to see the word "horrid" in a review HAHAHAHA! You'll have to wait and see about Amelia. I'm not giving anything away but just know I won't leave you guys hanging. Hoping to have the next update by tomorrow or Monday. The next one is LONG and took me awhile considering I'm doing the PoP challenge right now as well. I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: HAHAHHAA Putting together a TV stand!!!!! That's great!!! I'm glad you're liking it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: Guh I worked so HARD to make it unsexy hahahaha...seriously it was HARD...andnotinthesexywayomg. Hoping to have updates in the next couple weeks! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: GUH YAAAAAAAAAAAY thanks for the love! Girl EVERYONE seems to be waiting for Charltin hahaha I wonder why...*snigger* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: EEEEEEP Astute observation my friend...astute indeed *giggle* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Oh Heather, Heather, Heather! *squeal*
I just read this through in its entirety and I absolutely love it! I had read a little before, but after seeing your note about updating I went ahead and read it all and WOW. Justin is just...beyond whipped poor lad. I'm so ready to see Charlotte accidentally (on purpose) knock Amelia out of a window/in front of an oncoming bus. You've managed to create characters that are so believable and real that I feel like I'm sitting right there in the room able to see and hear all their thoughts.
This chapter was awesome, by the way. I love how Justin was so pumped because he'd had such a good day and the fact that Amelia was a major bitch didn't ruin his good mood. And I found it so adorable that when she mentioned Charlotte he smiled. And that was the most beautifully written awkward sex ever. I look forward to your next update (but feel free to work on your PoP first *cough*)!
--Jo
Author's Response: EEP I'm glad you liked it Jo!!! That's what I really love about this fic is that its kinda character driven and what everyone does REALLY effects the other characters. Its a lot of fun to write and its good to hear that you're having fun reading! Updates should be coming the week after next toallowtimeformetowritemyPoPficomg. Thanks for taking the time to read and review!!!
Pfft.
Author's Response: Pfft indeed...lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: HAHAHAHA SO TRUE!!! Updates hopefully within in the next couple weeks or so!!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: YESSSSSSSS Bad sex indeed!!! Guh that was so daunting to write so I'm glad it turned out good...I mean bad...hahaha Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: I completely agree...but he loves her...he really does *roll eyes* LOL! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
damn if i was justin i would've thrown her a dildo on the bed and stopped having sex with her at all!
what is up with that woman? and why is justin denying that the relationship is dead??!!!
continue soon...hopefully without amelia... ;)
Author's Response: HAHAHAHAHAHA Gawd could you IMAGINE Amelia with a dildo??? Hahahaha I don't know why but that's funny as hell to me. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: Thanks!!! *pets Fiance!J* He's so mistreated. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
I wonder what happened to Amelia?????
And I'm still waiting for Charltin's first kiss...
Author's Response: All will be revealed in time I promise. And Justin can't kiss CHARLOTTE...*snigger* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
hmmm....he loves her....he really does....
Why does that sound like it has a hint of doubt in it? I mean he channeled into Charlotte when her name was mentioned and smiled...that's very interesting. I love this story!!
Author's Response: EEP Very cool you picked up on that *gives you a cookie* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
All of this "he loves her..really" bull shit is getting on my nerves. He's really just convincing himself of LIES!!
Amelia is really strange. I don't understand how she could be so 'wild and carefree' and change to frigid bitch. Sorry...I get vulgar with little sleep apparently.
Author's Response: HAHAHA Its cool girl I totally feel ya! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
