OMG Heather....we need to have a talk.
Okay love love love this line
“Okay Charlotte you’re in charge,” Amelia says airily and Justin looks up and narrows his eyes before sighing, seemingly letting it go and returning to his cereal. “Bye.”
Like Justin is some child or better yet a dog that Charlotte's watching after! lol You are so good!
And the line of questioning...sounds like something Justin would do just because he can. Although if I was Charlotte I would probably be more pissed about losing my job. Simply because she does work for Amelia and not him. If it was him things could be worked around and laughed about but with Amelia as your boss it's not that easy. Anyways I'm rambling now....but I loved this update.
Author's Response: You know I seriously love it when you guys get all the undertones! This review made my day! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: Hahahaha yeah everything was going great till Amelia called huh? Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
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Not to say that I don't like Charlotte because she's super sweet and definitely seems like a better match to Justin at this point, but I'm still torn... It's nice though that you've set it up so it's not COMPLETELY obvious who's going to get with who and for how long... Anyway, sorry this is a novel. I really love this and you should definitely update soon!! Yay :)
Author's Response: Don't apologize!!! I LOVE long reviews!!!! I like your thoughts on Amelia and Charlotte. Thanks for taking the time to read and review!!!
Author's Response: HAHAHA I agree on all counts!!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
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Author's Response: I dunno she's got this stick up her ass...lol Damn Amelia. Thanks for taking the time to read and review!!!
She’s starting to get this. “Your hair smells good.”
Ok that entire paragraph had me cheesing like an idiot and then he went and said that...and just...ugh...I melted. It's like this unrecognized chemistry building that they aren't aware of. It's so damn cute. :-) And they the way he kept asking her questions, getting to know her, teaching her how to swing, the whole 'is she dating anyone' bit. Me thinks Mr. Timberlake might have a special liking to his/Amelia's assistant that he maybe hasn't noticed yet. hmmm...interesting. I love how you're making their friendship build. It's nice. But then at the end, *sigh* Amelia had to spoil it. I feel bad for poor Charlotte. If Justin doesn't save her, Amelia will put some blame on her I'm sure.
It's just sad how Justin allows Amelia to control him like this. I know he can stand up for his self, we've all see it but you know, all three characters are still a mystery still. I guess with time, you'll go more in depth with their personalities and why they're the way they are. hehehe. But I really loved this update. Such a nice change of pace. Don't take too long again. :). Update soon and good luck with the challege.
Author's Response: AWWWWWWWW meltage!!!! I love the whole getting-to-know-you parts of stories and when you can realize things before the characters really do. Yeah the next few sections are gonna really be intense as far as character reveal. So stay tuned ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Guuuuhhh there's mah Golfer!J :)
“And besides I need you to carry my clubs.”
Charlotte blinks at him before stepping out the door. “Well…okay…I guess I could do-”
“Charlotte,” he cuts her off laughing and she turns to look at him. “I’m not going to make you carry my clubs.” He shakes his head. “You were doing so well.”
I LOVED that part...cracked me up!
Author's Response: BAHAHAHHAHAHA That's one of my fave parts tooooooooo. Thanks for readin' and reviewin' bish!
Author's Response: Awwwww hahahaha well at least you tried! *gives you a cookie* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
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HAHAHAHAHA Amelia the constant cock block...lol Hoping to have updates up next week sometime. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
The interaction is just so cute and free with these too i wonder if it was like the begining of the relationship justin and amelia have, as in whats missing now
Author's Response: I love the interaction between Justin and Charlotte too! Its one of my favorite parts to write. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Where's the kiss damnit???????????
lol j/k, but great chapter. I love their interaction
Author's Response: Kiss? Amelia kissed Justin didn't she? *snigger* I'm glad you're enjoying the character interaction. Its one of my fave parts of this story. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
great chapter...THWACK ;)
hmm i hope your next chapter is gonna be up sooner than this one...took you hell lotta time girl.
damit i hate amelia shes bi-polar or something...
Author's Response: BAHAHHA THWACK!!!!! yeah I know my life got all crazy there for a minute. I had people visiting and a deadline on my PoP fic and poor little UTTK got kinda shoved to the wayside. Updates hopefully coming next week sometime. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
